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Japanese

私は2月10日から2ヶ月間部屋を借りたいです
家具が備え付けられていないとあなたは書きましたが、冷蔵庫はありますか？
今日は祝日なので明日225ドルのマネーオーダーを作ってＥＭＳでAdministrative holding fee を送ります。
ただ、マネーオーダーが到着するのが12月29日頃になってしまいます。
もしくはＭさんが現金で予約金を私の代わりに払っても良いですか？
デポジットは入居日までにマネーオーダーで送らなければなりませんか？
入居当日カードで支払うことはできませんか？

English

I would like to rent a room for 2 months beginning on February 10th.
You wrote that the room is not furnished, but is there a fridge?
Today is a holiday, so tomorrow I will make a 225 dollar money order and send you the administrative holding fee via EMS.
However, the money order will not arrive until December 29th.
Would it be alright if M-san paid for the holding fee in cash in my place?
Does the deposit have to be sent as a money order before the day when I move in?
Isn't it possible to pay using a credit card on that same day?

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[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 24 Dec 2014 at 07:17

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I would like to rent a room for 2 months beginning on February 10th.
You wrote that the room is not furnished, but is there a fridge?
Today is a holiday, so tomorrow I will make a 225 dollar money order and send you the administrative holding fee via EMS.
However, the money order will not arrive until December 29th.
Would it be alright if M-san paid for the holding fee in cash in my place?
Does the deposit have to be sent as a money order before the day when I move in?
Isn't it possible to pay using a credit card on that same day?

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I would like to rent a room for 2 months beginning on February 10th.
You wrote that the room is not furnished, but is there a fridge [informal]?
Today is a holiday, so tomorrow I will make a 225 dollar money order and send you the administrative holding fee via EMS.
However, the money order will not arrive until December 29th.
Would it be alright [informal] if M-san paid for the holding fee in cash in my place?
Does the deposit have to be sent as a money order before the day when I move in?
Isn't it possible to pay using a credit card on that same day?