Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

こんにちは。こちらの商品は、

新品と書いてありますが、商品タグがついていますか？

元の包装、ビニールなどはありますか？

お店で購入したそのままの状態ですか？

ご連絡お待ちしています。

English

Good Day!
This product is marked as new one, i would like to ask is there any tag with the product?
Is there any plastic or some kinds of that thing packing the product originally?
Is it still keep in the purchase condition?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★ 11 Dec 2014 at 01:50

original
Good Day!
This product is marked as new one, i would like to ask is there any tag with the product?
Is there any plastic or some kinds of that thing packing the product originally?
Is it still keep in the purchase condition?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

corrected
Good day!
This product is marked as new, [comma splice] I would like to ask if there is a tag with the product.
Is there [avoid using the “there is” construction repeatedly] any plastic or the original packing?
Is it still keep [parts of speech confusion] in the purchase condition?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.↵