Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

新品。厳密な検品の後に発送します。値段が100ドル以上のアイテムは追跡番号をつけて発送します。通常5日以内に日本からの発送となります。平均的な配達所要日数は7日間から22日間となります。

English

Brand new.
After we inspect the items throughly, we will send it out.
We will send the items with a tracking number for the items over $100.
Usually we will sent it out from Japan within 5 days.
Average delivery time is 7 to 22days.

Reviews ( 2 )

trsvaski rated this translation result as ★★★ 14 Nov 2014 at 13:58

「We will send the items with a tracking number for the items over $100.」の文ですが、「items」が重複していますので、そこを工夫すべきだと思います。
「追跡番号をつける」ことに焦点をあてた方が良いかと思います。
また、次の文で「send」とすべきところが「sent」になっています。

chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★★ 14 Nov 2014 at 15:08

original
Brand new.
After we inspect the items throughly, we will send it out.
We will send the items with a tracking number for the items over $100.
Usually we will sent it out from Japan within 5 days.↵
Average delivery time is 7 to 22days.

corrected
Brand new item.
We will ship the item after a thorough inspection.
For the items with its price is or more than $100, we will ship them with tracking numbers.
We normally ship the ordered items out from Japan within 5 days from the date of order placement, and average time required for shipment is between 7 - 22 days.