Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: 体験談

Japanese

本当にキレイで感動します。札幌から近くで、手軽に行けるのも魅力です。札幌についた初日に行くのがオススメです

English

I was moved by the very beautiful view. It's also close enough from Sapporo, so you can get there easily. You had better to go there on the first day you arrived at Sapporo.

Reviews ( 1 )

ilad rated this translation result as ★★★ 20 Oct 2014 at 23:36

original
I was moved by the very beautiful view. It's also close enough from Sapporo, so you can get there easily. You had better to go there on the first day you arrived at Sapporo.

corrected
I was moved by the very beautiful view. It's also close enough from Sapporo, so you can get there easily. You had better go there on the first day you arrived at Sapporo.

had better の後は原型動詞が来てtoは不要です。ただhad betterは少し命令調なので、recommendを工夫して表現を和らげることができると思います。