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Japanese

Ａの方法では何らかのエラーにより支払うことができませんでした。
商品代金は銀行から送金致しますので銀行口座番号を教えてください。
宜しくお願い致します。

English

As there is an error in A's method, the payment is unable to be made.
As the payment for the product is sent from the bank, please kindly tell me the bank account number.
Thank you.

Reviews ( 1 )

ryojiyono rated this translation result as ★★★ 13 Aug 2014 at 12:55

original
As there is an error in A's method, the payment is unable to be made.
As the payment for the product is sent from the bank, please kindly tell me the bank account number.
Thank you.

corrected
As there is an error in A's method, the payment is unable to be made.
Please kindly let me know your bank account number as I will pay for the product through the bank.
Thank you.

tell meよりもLet me knowの方がよいと思い添削させていただきました。