Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 01 Jul 2014 at 11:51

alvin
alvin 50
Japanese

大阪 BIGCAT


スタンディング 整理番号付き/¥5,650(税込)
別途ドリンク代必要 /1枚
※3歳以上有料

夢番地

English

Osaka BIGCAT


Standing with with reference number/¥5,650 (tax included)
Fees for additional drink needed
※Charges for children older than 3 years needed

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linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 23 Jul 2014 at 01:05

original
Osaka BIGCAT


Standing with with reference number/¥5,650 (tax included)
Fees for additional drink needed
※Charges for children older than 3 years needed

Dream address


corrected
Osaka BIGCAT


Standing with reference number/¥5,650 (tax included)
Fees for a drink needed
※Charges applied for those who older than 3 years old

Yume Banchi


夢番地 is a proper noun, so it's better to spell it in Roma-ji.
Charges aren't limited to kids but adults, so I changed the way of writing.
I guess you already noticed this, but the customer must order a drink which is not included in the fee.
Overall translation quality is very good.

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Additional info: アーティスト名は「AAA」に統一下さい。全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。