Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

go83105

竣工当時からほとんどかわっていない。

御堂筋の中心に建てられた大丸心斎橋店は大阪のランドマークのひとつでした。

ニューヨークのようなイルミネーション。

クリスマスの季節にはイルミネーションが点灯して厳かな雰囲気になります。

５．旧ダイビル本館

2013年に再築されたオフィスビル。

竣工：1925年
当時としては最新のオフィスビル。

1926年に渡辺節の設計で建てられた、ネオ・ロマネスク様式の大規模なビルディング

旧館の外装パーツをほとんど再利用している。

English

go83105
It hasn't changed much since it was completed.
Daimaru Shinsaibashi store, which was built at the center of Midosuji, is one of the landmarks of Osaka.
The illumination here is just like in New York.
During Christmas season, the illumination lights up and creates a solemn atmosphere.

5. The old Daibiru Honkan Building
An office building which was rebuilt in 2013.
Completed in 1925.
It was considered the newest building at that time.
The building was constructed after Setsu Watanabe's design and is a large-scaled building with Neo-Romanesque style.
Most of the exterior parts of the old building are still being reused.

Reviews ( 1 )

hummingchie rated this translation result as ★★★ 20 Feb 2014 at 23:46

original
go83105
It hasn't changed much since it was completed.
Daimaru Shinsaibashi store, which was built at the center of Midosuji, is one of the landmarks of Osaka.
The illumination here is just like in New York.
During Christmas season, the illumination lights up and creates a solemn atmosphere.

5. The old Daibiru Honkan Building
An office building which was rebuilt in 2013.
Completed in 1925.
It was considered the newest building at that time.
The building was constructed after Setsu Watanabe's design and is a large-scaled building with Neo-Romanesque style.
Most of the exterior parts of the old building are still being reused.

corrected
go83105
It hasn't changed much since it was completed.
Daimaru Shinsaibashi store, which was built at the center of Midosuji, was one of the landmarks of Osaka.
The illumination here is just like in New York.
During Christmas season, the illumination lights up and creates a solemn atmosphere.

5. The old Daibiru Honkan Building
An office building which was rebuilt in 2013.
Completed in 1925.
It was considered the newest building at that time.
The building was constructed after Setsu Watanabe's design and is a large-scaled building with a Neo-Romanesque style.
Most of the exterior parts of the old building were reused.

I found a couple of wrong tense. Sometimes we use present tense when talking about the past, so I understand non-native Japanese speaker sometimes misunderstand.

[luklak]

Thank you for your review! It's really great to learn things from a native. I was always confused about the tenses :-)