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Japanese

東京での商談は、１８日１４時で問題ないでしょうか。
また、待ち合わせ場所は、渋谷ではなく赤坂に変更して頂けませんでしょうか。
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English

Is it all right if we have a Tokyo business meeting on the 18th at 14:00?
Could we meet in Akasaka instead of Shibuya?
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Reviews ( 1 )

akithegeek1 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 12 Feb 2014 at 21:16

original
Is it all right if we have a Tokyo business meeting on the 18th at 14:00?
Could we meet in Akasaka instead of Shibuya?
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corrected
Is it all right if we have our business meeting in Tokyo on the 18th at 2:00 PM?
Could we meet in Akasaka instead of Shibuya?
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The translation itself is accurate, but I believe it could use some minor improvements here and there.