Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 57 / 1 Review / 23 Jan 2014 at 00:19

juemon1
juemon1 57 Experienced translator of Japanese-En...
Japanese

Bのポリシーでは関税が発生した場合は売主が買主に全額負担するのでしょうか?
ドイツ語が苦手なのでホームページのポリシーが上手く読み取れません。
おしえてください。
それとも売主と買主で話あって決めることで問題ありませんか?
Bのポリシーにはなんと記載があるのですか?

English

According to the Policy B, would the seller have to be responsible for all the tariff incurred towards the buyer?
As my German is not good and I cannot comprehend the policy on your homepage. Would you please advise me if the tariff can be negotiated between the buyer and the seller? Could you please explain what Policy B means?

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kotetsu 55 東京で経営コンサルタントをしており、海外案件では翻訳業務も担当しています。...
kotetsu rated this translation result as ★★★ 23 Jan 2014 at 01:31

original
According to the Policy B, would the seller have to be responsible for all the tariff incurred towards the buyer?
As my German is not good and I cannot comprehend the policy on your homepage. Would you please advise me if the tariff can be negotiated between the buyer and the seller? Could you please explain what Policy B means?

corrected
According to the Policy B, would the seller have to be responsible for all the tariff incurred towards the buyer?
As I am not good at German so I cannot comprehend the policy on your homepage. Would you please advise me if the tariff can be negotiated between the buyer and the seller? What are written in the Policy B?

juemon1 juemon1 23 Jan 2014 at 18:43

Thanks very much for your correction. Especially the second sentence flows much more nicely. I also appreciate how accurate your last sentence is. However, "what 'are' written" sounds awkward grammatically. So I would say: "What is written in the Policy B?"

juemon1 juemon1 23 Jan 2014 at 18:45

I also realized there is an error in my second sentence. It should be: "As I am not good at German so I cannon comprehend the police on your homepage, would you please advise me...."

kotetsu kotetsu 23 Jan 2014 at 22:37

Thank you! I also think "What is written in the Policy B?" is better!

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