Translator Reviews ( Japanese → Native English )

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Japanese

世界で最初のデジタルレンジファインダーカメラ、R-D1。その特別なカメラできりとったあなたの特別な日々を、美しいギャラリーに残しましょう。

English

The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

Reviews ( 4 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★ 24 Oct 2013 at 17:48

original
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

corrected
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories be left in beautiful gallery with this camera.

The wording was a bit awkward but yeah, good translation!

[mlinah_91]

Thank you for the review! Yeah I admit it was awkward since I was in a hurry and still a starter in translating but I'm trying my best! :)

newbie_translator rated this translation result as ★★★ 24 Oct 2013 at 23:09

original
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

corrected
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of your special memories remain in a beautiful gallery with this camera.

[psychonyaku]

"Let your pieces of your special memories" is not proper English.

psychonyaku rated this translation result as ★★ 25 Oct 2013 at 10:47

"to be remained" is not proper English.

[mlinah_91]

Noted and thank you for the comments. I'll try to avoid the same mistake next time. :)

mon_angelo79 rated this translation result as ★★★ 26 Oct 2013 at 21:25

original
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let your pieces of special memories to be remained in beautiful gallery with this camera.

corrected
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. This camera let's you preserve pieces of special memories in a beautiful gallery.