Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

誠に申し訳ありません。
すべての責任は当店にあります。
しかし、店が潰れては取り返しがつきません。
価格のミスがあなたおひとりならば商品を出荷していたでしょう。
しかし、ミスの数が多すぎました。
できれば双方に利益があるようにと、提案をさせて戴きましたが、
提案を受けて戴けないのであれば、
申し訳ありませんがこちらからキャンセルさせて戴きます。
ご迷惑をお掛けしました。
心よりお詫びいたします。

English

I am truly sorry, our store takes full responsibility. However if our store were to shut down there would be no coming back. If yours was the only pricing mistake I would have still sent out the item. However there have been far too many mistakes. I wanted to suggest a way that we can both if possible still benefit from this situation however if you were to not accept this suggestion, I will have to regretfully cancel the order. I am terribly sorry for the inconvenience and most sincerely apologize.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 02 Jul 2013 at 14:32

original
I am truly sorry, our store takes full responsibility. However if our store were to shut down there would be no coming back. If yours was the only pricing mistake I would have still sent out the item. However there have been far too many mistakes. I wanted to suggest a way that we can both if possible still benefit from this situation however if you were to not accept this suggestion, I will have to regretfully cancel the order. I am terribly sorry for the inconvenience and most sincerely apologize.

corrected
I am truly sorry, our store takes full responsibility. However if our store were to shut down there would be no coming back. If yours were the only pricing mistake I would have still sent out the item. However there have been far too many mistakes. I wanted to suggest a way that we can both if possible still benefit from this situation however if you were to not accept this suggestion, I will have to regretfully cancel the order. I am terribly sorry for the inconvenience and most sincerely apologize.

Nothing major, just the part where you used the subjunctive would require "were" instead of "was"

[russ87]

Thank you for pointing that out, I will be more careful in future.