Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: アイテムNo.は後ほど自分で入力致します。

Japanese

あなたはアイテムNo.xxの修理代金の支払いを拒否しますか？
もし支払わないのであれば、私はアイテムNo.xxのキャンセルを希望します。

アイテムNo.○○は発送していますか？
発送しているのであれば、トラッキングナンバーを教えて下さい。
発送していなければ、アイテムNo.○○もキャンセルを希望します。

２４時間以内に必ず返事を下さい。
返事がなければ、アイテムNo.○○に関してpaypalへ異議申し立てをします。

English

Are you refusing to pay the repair costs for Item No. xx?
If the payment is not made, I would like to cancel Item No. xx.

Are you shipping Item No. oo?
If it is being shipped, please tell me the tracking number.
If it is not being shipped, I would like to cancel Item No. oo.

Please respond within 24 hours.
If I receive no response, I will file an objection with Paypal regarding Item. No. oo.

Reviews ( 1 )

sheepa73 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 07 Jun 2013 at 15:33

original
Are you refusing to pay the repair costs for Item No. xx?
If the payment is not made, I would like to cancel Item No. xx.

Are you shipping Item No. oo?
If it is being shipped, please tell me the tracking number.
If it is not being shipped, I would like to cancel Item No. oo.

Please respond within 24 hours.
If I receive no response, I will file an objection with Paypal regarding Item. No. oo.

corrected
Are you refusing to pay the repair costs for Item No. xx?
If the payment is not made, I would like to cancel Item No. xx.

Are you shipping Item No. oo?　=> Have you already shipped Item No. oo?
If it is being shipped, please tell me the tracking number. => If it has already been shipped,
If it is not being shipped, I would like to cancel Item No. oo. => If it has not been shipped yet,

Please respond within 24 hours.
If I receive no response, I will file an objection with Paypal regarding Item. No. oo.

アイテムNo.○○は発送していますか？
はこれから発送するのかを聞いているのではなくて、「すでに発送したのか」という意味だと思います。
でも全体的に読みやすい訳です。