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Japanese

ただ彼らはジム経営がメインビジネスなのでホールド販売に力を入れているようには思えません。

確かにホールドの価格で購入を決めている人が多いです。今後、貴社ブランドの付加価値をもっと伝えれば、品質とブランド力で売れます。そのためにあなたからの情報をたくさん頂けると助かります。新商品情報やこだわってりる部分、、材質詳細、シェイパーの思いや製造風景なども情報を頂けるとHPに掲載して行きます。


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材質はAtomikに似ている。

English

However, because their main busyness is Gym. Therefore, it doesn't seem like they are putting effort into selling Hold.

It is true that there are bunch of people who decide whether purchase Hold or not depending upon its price. Thus, from now on, if you let people know your company's added value, you can sell your company's products only by their quality and name. In order to realize that, I would like to have more of your products' information. That will be a great help. We will do publish your new products' strong point, details of material properties, Shaiper's thought, and manufacturing view, etc... on the web site.

Comment on the information from you
The quality of the material looks like Atmik's.

Reviews ( 1 )

skyblueinq rated this translation result as ★★★★ 11 Dec 2012 at 11:53

分かりやすく、スムーズな英語です。
参考になります。