Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 28 Apr 2010 at 12:05

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Japanese

激しい吹雪の中、少年は描きあげた絵を手にして彼女家に向かうのだが・・・

English

In a heavy snow storm, the boy headed for her home, however---

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elephantrans 50 米国の日本法人会社にて、25年以上の勤務実績があります。 ・主に輸出向け...
elephantrans rated this translation result as ★★★ 05 Oct 2013 at 15:21

original
In a heavy snow storm, the boy headed for her home, however---

corrected
In a heavy snowstorm, the boy heads for her home with his painting he painted, however---

Something is missing. It sounds that the original sentence is describing the basic idea of a story.

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