Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

①はじめまして！
興味のある商品を出品して頂きありがとうございます。
商品〇を２つとも購入するので1個140＄合計280＄にして頂けませんか？
商品はまとめて送料50＄で発送できますか？
発送先は日本です。
ご検討よろしくお願い致します。

②ご検討ありがとうございました。
もし気が変わりましたらご連絡ください。
よろしくお願い致します。

English

1 I am writing to you for the first time!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, so would you make it 1 pcs at 140＄, which is 280＄ altogether?
Would it be possible to ship altogether at 50＄ to Japan, please?
I appreciate your further consideration.
2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

Reviews ( 1 )

karekora rated this translation result as ★★★ 02 Mar 2022 at 22:46

original
1 I am writing to you for the first time!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, so would you make it 1 pcs at 140＄, which is 280＄ altogether?
Would it be possible to ship altogether at 50＄ to Japan, please?
I appreciate your further consideration.
2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

corrected
1 Nice to meet you!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, could you make 1 pcs at $140; $280 altogether?
Would it be possible to ship everything to Japan together for $50?
I appreciate your further consideration.↵

2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

It is more common to put the currency mark before the number.

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Dear karekora, thank you so much for your correction as well as review. It helps to improve my translation!!