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Additional info: 桟橋で小型船に乗る際の注意点で、乗船するお客様に伝えるテキストになります。
宜しくお願いいたします。

Japanese

当日はコロナ対策として、一つお願いがあるのですが、
船に乗船されるまでの間、桟橋上ではマスク着用のご協力をお願いしております。
船に乗られてからは外しても大丈夫ですので、何卒ご協力のほど宜しくお願いいたします。

English

I have a favor to ask you about measure for Covid-19 on the day.
Please wear a mask on the bridge until you board a ship.
You can take it off after boarding it. We appreciate your cooperation.

Reviews ( 1 )

shiba77 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 02 Oct 2020 at 15:03

original
I have a favor to ask you about measure for Covid-19 on the day.
Please wear a mask on the bridge until you board a ship.
You can take it off after boarding it. We appreciate your cooperation.

corrected
I have a favor to ask you about preventive measures for Covid-19 on the day.
Please wear a mask on the bridge until you board the ship.
You can take it off after boarding. We appreciate your cooperation.

全体にわかりやすかったです！
You can take it off after boarding it.は、1つ目のitのマスクと2つ目のitの船をわかりやすくするため，2つ目を削除したらいいと思いました。