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元の翻訳
It is possible to ship on 2/18 but
we cannot guarantee the delivery date.
Plus, we need to obtain the product once
the order is confirmed.
If we use the tracking shipping, usually,
it takes from two weeks to around one month for the deliver.
If it is ok with you, I will post the product on the ebay.
Thank you very much in advance.

It is possible to ship three products.
If it is ok with you, I will post three products on the ebay.
Please respond to me if there is anything.
Thank you very much.

I understood.
I will post the product then.
Please confirm that you are ok with it, please order it.

If there is no inventory left,
I will contact to you.

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It is possible to ship on 2/18 but
we cannot guarantee the delivery date.
Plus, we need to obtain the product once
the order is confirmed.
If we use the tracking shipping, usually,
it takes from two weeks to around one month for the delivery.
If it is ok with you, I will post the product on the ebay.
Thank you very much in advance.

It is possible to ship three products.
If it is ok with you, I will post three products on the ebay.
Please respond to me.
Thank you very much.

I understood.
I will post the product then.
Please confirm that you are ok with it, and please order it.

If there is no inventory left,
I will contact you.

元の翻訳
Hello.

Nice to meet you. I am Kenji Tanaka.
I have retailed business in Japan at present, I sell attractive products of all round the world to customers in Japan.

So I was impressed with your products, I do hope that you distribute the items for us.

If you could distribute the items, please contact us to show the details.

I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

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Hello.

Nice to meet you. I am Kenji Tanaka.
I have retailed business in Japan at present, I sell attractive products of all around the world to customers in Japan.

So I was impressed with your products, I do hope that you distribute the items for us.

If you could distribute the items, please contact us to show the details.

I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

元の翻訳
Good day.
I am Tanaka kenji.
As of now, I engaged in the retail business in Japan. I am selling attractive products around the world to Japanese consumers. I want to impressed my products to your company. if you want to have wholesale products. you can contact me. If you want wholesale products. I am glad if you contact me about the detail. I am looking forward for your response.

Sincerely yours,

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Good day.
I am Tanaka Kenji.
As of now, I engaged in the retail business in Japan. I am selling attractive products around the world to Japanese consumers.↵
I am impressed with your products, and I would like to sell your products here, I made a contact with you↵
If you could sell wholesale products. I am glad if you could contact me about the details. ↵
I am looking forward for your response.

Sincerely yours,

元の翻訳
Since we are a small company having no space for stocking, we are planing to receive the order from customer on the web store, by using the picture and movie of your products, and order them to you. Is it possible?If not, should we purchase it as the stocks? We are thinking about the exclusive contract with you on future. Please let us promote and sale your excellent products to other company at the same business. Could you tell me the trade price on that case?

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Since we are a small company having no space for stocking, we are planing to receive the order from customer on the web store, by using the picture and movie of your products, and then order them to you. Is it possible?If not, should we purchase it as the stocks? We are thinking about the exclusive contract with you on future. Please let us promote and sale your excellent products to other company at the same business. Could you tell me the trade price on that case?

元の翻訳
Since a small company like us do not have backlog space, I am thinking about using pictures and review videos of the product on our web store, and also ordering from your company when a customer places an order, but will that be possible? Or, do we have to purchase a few from you as stocks? Although we are looking into an exclusive contract in the near future, is it ok for us to advertise and sell your fantastic products to other industry peers? In that case, can we decide on the price for sale?

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Since a small company like us do not have backlog space, I am thinking about using pictures and review videos of the product on our web store, and also ordering from your company when a customer places an order, but will that be possible? Or, do we have to purchase a few from you as stocks? Although we are looking into an exclusive contract in the near future, is it ok for us to advertise and sell your fantastic products to other industry peers? In that case, can we decide on the price for sale on our side?

元の翻訳
We have both NZ-21 and NZ18 but will you buy them?

The number of articles all together will be 21, costing $OO.
Unfortunately we cannot provide a discount on the goods as they are not easy to find but we can provide you shipping at no cost, meaning a 00 dollar discount.
Fundamentally we do not conduct direct transactions.
EBay is strict towards Japanese buyers so would it be possible to buy just one thing from eBay?
We will reduce the price of the total order.
After that we will claim the amount of money reduced from the order directly from your PayPal account.
Will you need insurance on the items? We have an insurance premium.

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We have both NZ-21 and NZ18 and will you buy them?

The number of articles all together will be 21, costing $OO.
Unfortunately we cannot provide a discount on the goods as they are not easy to find but we can provide you shipping at no cost, meaning a 00 dollar discount.
Fundamentally we do not conduct direct transactions.
eBay is strict towards Japanese buyers so would it be possible to buy just one thing from eBay?
We will reduce the price of the total order.
After that we will claim the amount of money reduced from the order directly to your PayPal account.
Will you need insurance on the items? We have an insurance premium.

元の翻訳
I also have NZ-21 and NZ18. Would you like to purchase them as well?

I have 21 in total and the total price is $〇〇.
The shipping fee is $100.
I can not discount much as this product can not be found easily any more.↵
I do not charge you the shipping fee so the price will be $〇〇.
I do not usually deal with clients directly.
ebay is not easy place for Japanese buyers.
Would you be able to purchase one at ebay?
I will give you the discount on the total cost.
After that I will charge you directly through Paypal.
Would you like to take an insurance for the products?
We will pay for the insurance if you would like to take.

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I also have NZ-21 and NZ18. Would you like to purchase them as well?

I have 21 in total and the total price is $〇〇.
The shipping fee is $100.
I can not discount much as this product can not be found easily any more, but I do not charge you the shipping fee so the price will be $〇〇.
I do not usually deal with clients directly.
ebay is not easy place for Japanese buyers.
Would you be able to purchase one at ebay?
I will give you the discount on the total cost.
After that I will charge you directly through Paypal.
Would you like to take an insurance for the products?
We will pay for the insurance if you would like to take.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your immediate reply.
I know I am asking a big favor but I want a detail quote by during tomorrow.

Since our client has not organized pipes that is going to be used, at the moment we are not sure about the inside diameter of the pipe. But it is more likely than 27.6mm, so　I want inside diameter of plumbing pipes to be 27.6mm when you select a model.

Let's say the inside diameter of plumbing pipe is 27.6mm, please give us the quote for A type and B type for the following model.
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Thank you for your immediate reply.
I know I am asking a big favor but I want a detailEd quote by tomorrow.

Since our client has not organized pipes that is going to be used, at the moment we are not sure about the inside diameter of the pipe. But it is more likely as 27.6mm, so　I want inside diameter of plumbing pipes to be 27.6mm when you select a model.

Let's say the inside diameter of plumbing pipe is 27.6mm, please give us the quote for A type and B type for the following model.
640i…...

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thanks for your asking.
When you buy two, they would be 72.45 dollars.
In addition, we will send it with tracking so you can save 10% compared with the regular price.
Thank you for your consideration.

I am sure.
I'll put up the items later then please make an order on ebay.
Let me delete the page in a few days because it is different from the normal sale.
Thank you for your shopping at our shop.

Thank you for your order.
We prepare for shipping.
Please wait for the arrival .

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Hello.
Thanks for your asking.
When you buy two, they would be 72.45 dollars.
In addition, we will send it with tracking so you can save 10% compared with the regular price.
Thank you for your consideration.

I understood.
I'll put up the items later then please make an order on ebay.
Let me delete the page in a few days because it is different from the normal sale.
Thank you for your shopping at our shop.

Thank you for your order.
We prepare for shipping.
Please wait for a while until we ship.

元の翻訳
Good day.
Thank you for your inquiry.
If you order 2 pieces of this item, we can sell them at71.45 dollars.
We will send them with a tracking, and you will get 10 percent bargain
compared with what we usually sell .
We appreciate your consideration.

We understand it.
As we will list afterwards, please order at eBay.
As it is a special listing, we will delete the page a few days later.
We hope that you understand t.
Thank you for selecting our shop this time.

Thank you for ordering this time.
We will prepare the shipment.
May we ask you a little patience until we ship?

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Good day.
Thank you for your inquiry.
If you order 2 pieces of this item, we can sell them at 71.45 dollars.
We will send them with a tracking, and you will get 10 percent bargain
compared with what we usually sell.
We appreciate your consideration.

We understand it.
As we will list afterwards, please order at eBay.
As it is a special listing, we will delete the page a few days later.
We hope that you understand it.
Thank you for selecting our shop this time.

Thank you for ordering this time.
We will prepare the shipment.
May we ask you a little patience until we ship?

元の翻訳
How do you do?
Excuse me to write to you suddenly.

This is about the price negotiation.

As for the good you sell,
can I purchase It at ** dollars including the postage?

I pay the money immediately via paypal within 24 hours if the reduction is possible.

Also, I will continue to purchase in future
if the price negotiations are possible.

I am terribly sorry to disrupt you when you are busy,
but I sincerely hope that you will take this into consideration.

Many thanks,

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How do you do?
Excuse me to write to you suddenly.

This is about the price negotiation.

As for the good you sell,
can I purchase it at ** dollars including the postage?

I pay the money immediately via paypal within 24 hours if the reduction is possible.

Also, I will continue to purchase in future
if the price negotiations are possible.

I am terribly sorry to disrupt you when you are busy,
but I sincerely hope that you will take this into consideration.

Many thanks,

元の翻訳
How do you do?
I hope that you do not mind my sudden contacting.
I am contacting you regarding the price negotiation.

As for the item that your company sells,
may I purchase by xx dollars in total including the shipping charge?
If you can give me a discount, I will pay via Paypal within 24 hours.

If I can negotiate the price, I am considering purchasing continuously.
I hate to ask you while you are busy, but I appreciate if you consider it. ↵
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How do you do?
I hope that you do not mind my sudden contacting.
I am contacting you regarding the price negotiation.

As for the item that your company sells,
may I purchase at xx dollars in total including the shipping charge?
If you can give me a discount, I will pay via Paypal within 24 hours.

If I can negotiate the price, I am considering purchasing continuously.
I hate to ask you while you are busy, but I appreciate if you consider it.

元の翻訳
Hello.

I am writing you regarding the price.

May I purchase an item by your company at the price $** including shipping cost?

If the discount is available, I will pay you via PayPal within 24 hours.

If you could give me an discount, I would like to purchase your items again.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello.

I am writing you regarding the price.

May I purchase an item by your company at the price $** including shipping cost?

If the discount is available, I will pay you via PayPal within 24 hours.

If you could give me a discount, I would like to purchase your items again.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I apologize that our infromation was not good enough to explain about how to order.
Let me show you how to how to order again.

1. Please choose "Credit Card"
2. Please use THE OTHER credit card that you have, and fill the information.

It seem you have other credit card with debit function, so please use the one to order it (or them).
Thank you very much for your patient and order.

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I apologize that our infromation was not good enough to explain about how to order.
Let me show you how to order again.

1. Please choose "Credit Card"
2. Please use a different credit card that you have, and fill the information.

It seem you have a different credit card with debit function, so please use the one to order it (or them).
Thank you very much for your patient and order.

元の翻訳
The value of the comments on demo site is referencing Views value.
Also each category page has currently uses its category name for URL but it would be better if we had options such as to designate POST ID. (Because otherwise, it cannot be used outside of English-speaking countries.)

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The value of the comments on demo site is referencing the Views value.
Also each category page has currently uses its category name for URL but it would be better if we had options such as to designate POST ID. (Otherwise, it cannot be used outside of English-speaking countries.)

元の翻訳
The value of the comments on the demonstration website refers to the value of the views.
URL of each category page is by category name.
It is good if we have an option that we can designate to Post ID, etc. (as we cannot use in non-English speaking area).

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The value of the comments on the demonstration website refers to the value of the views.
URL of each category page is by category name.
It is good if we have an option that we can designate to Post ID, etc. (as we cannot use in non-English speaking areas).

元の翻訳
We checked the operation after purchase.
It is correct because I checked with a specialist shop staff.
We couldn't confirm any dents.
Is it such big dent？
You do not need to send something like you tube since we trust you.

What should we do for you.
I would like to know your wish.

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We checked the operation after purchase.
It is correct because I checked with a specialist shop staff.
We couldn't confirm any dents.
Is it such a big dent？
You do not need to send something like YouTube since we trust you.

What should we do for you.
I would like to know your wish.

元の翻訳
When I purchased the item, I touched it and checkd it throughly.
I am certain about it because both the store specialized the item and I checked it.

When I purchased it, I didn't see any dent.
Is there a large dent?

I believe you so you don't need to upload a video on YouTube.

How would you like to be handled it?
Please let me know if you like to cancel this order or if you like to replace it with a new one?

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When I purchased the item, I touched it and checkd it throughly.
I am certain about it because both the store specialized the item and I checked it.

When I purchased it, I didn't see any dent.
Is there a large dent?

I believe you so you don't need to upload a video on YouTube.

How would you like to be handled it?
Please let me know what you would like.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
Would you please tell me what's the problem in detail?

Then, I will contact the shop from where I purchased it.

Are there any problems on the exterior? Are there any dents or damages?

You are able to ask me to refund a part of the price, but you are also be able to return the product and receive a full refund.

Please tell me which you would prefer.

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I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
Would you please tell me what the problem is in detail?

Then, I will contact the shop where I purchased it from.

Are there any problems on the exterior? Are there any dents or damages?

You are able to ask me to refund a part of the price, but you are also be able to return the product and receive a full refund.

Please tell me which you would prefer.

元の翻訳
In case if it is possible, is it OK to set the domestic selling price whatever more than MAP price ? We are a small company yet, we would like to have good relationship for long term, and wish to become a strong partner by growing together.

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In the case it is possible, is it OK to set the domestic selling price whatever more than MAP price ? Although we are a small company yet, we would like to have a good relationship for a long term, and wish to become a strong partner by growing together.

元の翻訳
We are at setup phase of web store which is planed to open in March exclusively in domestic market. We assume to start selling xx there. We want to purchase 10pieces of xx and 2 pieces of yy, how about the payment method ? Also we plan to sell in overseas market from our store which has 〇〇 Japanese Yen of annual sales in domestic market only in the category of music instrument, would it be possible ?

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We are at a setup phase of an web store which is planed to open in March exclusively in a domestic market. We assume to start selling xx there. We want to purchase 10 pieces of xx and 2 pieces of yy, how about the payment method ? Also we plan to sell in an overseas market from our store which has 〇〇 Japanese Yen of annual sales in a domestic market only in the category of music instrument, would it be possible ?

元の翻訳
We are informed that there isn't any company who has a exclusive contract. we would like to confirm with you whether the price setting is up to us, if it is more than the MAP price you have indicated or not. We plan to set $10 less than the price from W, in order to spread the xx, which is excellent, within the domestic market. We have been acknowledged the voices from famous artists who has practically tested the goods, which has been purchased as sample by NAMM.

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We are informed that there are not any companies who have an exclusive contract. We would like to confirm with you whether the price setting is up to us in Japan, if it is more than the MAP price you have indicated or not. We plan to set $10 less than the price of vv, in order to spread the xx, which is excellent, within the domestic market. We have been acknowledged the voices from famous artists who have practically tested the goods, which have been purchased as a sample by NAMM.