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It has been decided that KEMURI appears in 『ITADAKI -ITADAKI- 2015』 organized on 6 and 7 June!!

Date: June 6 and 7 (Saturday & Sunday) ※Performance schedule will be announced later.
Venue: Shizuoka, Yoshida Park Special Stage (4036-2 Kawashiri Yoshida-Cho, Haibara-gun, Shizuoka prefecture)
Time table, price and ticket release date will be announced later.

[Official Site] http://www.itadaki-bbb.com/

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It has been confirmed that KEMURI plays "ITADAKI -ITADAKI- 2015" organized on 6 and 7 June!!

Date: June 6 and 7 (Saturday & Sunday) ※Performance schedule will be announced later.
Venue: Shizuoka, Yoshida Park Special Stage (4036-2 Kawashiri Yoshida-Cho, Haibara-gun, Shizuoka prefecture)
Time table, price and ticket release date will be announced later.

[Official Site] http://www.itadaki-bbb.com/

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I have a question about new features that will be implemented in the next Ver.

How will be the URL when the new page is displayed in different URL? Is it still up in the air?
I am concerned about the URL structure and if the title will be taken correctly.

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AAA is a file sharing software that was caught on in Japan a while ago. It is famous only in Japan.

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I have a question about new features that will be implemented in the next ver.

How will the be URL when a new page is displayed in a different URL? Is it still up in the air?
I am concerned about the URL structure and if the title will be taken correctly [unclear].
[わずらわしい質問で申し訳ありません。]
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AAA is a file sharing software that was caught on in Japan a while ago. It is famous only in Japan.

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I have a question about new features that will be implemented in the next Ver.

How will be the URL when the new page is displayed in different URL? Is it still up in the air?
I am concerned about the URL structure and if the title will be taken correctly.

--

AAA is a file sharing software that was caught on in Japan a while ago. It is famous only in Japan.

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I have a question about new features that will be implemented in the next Ver.

How will the URL be when the new page is displayed in different URL? Is it still undecided?
I am concerned about the URL structure and if the title will be taken correctly. ↵
I am sorry for the troublesome question.

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AAA is a file sharing software that was caught on in Japan a while ago. It is famous only in Japan.

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消費者の2/3がOculusを使って買い物をしたいと述べている。

消費者の3人に2人が、Oculusのバーチャルリアリティシステムの助けを得ながらのショッピングを試してみたいと述べている。

これは、市場調査会社であるWalker Sandsによる小売改革研究によって導かれた結論のひとつである。また、30％の消費者が、もしバーチャルリアリティを使って商品を試すことができるのであれば、もっとオンラインでの買い物をしてみたいと述べている。

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消費者の2/3がOculusを使って買い物をしたいと述べている。

消費者の3人に2人が、Oculusのバーチャルリアリティシステムを使ってショッピングをしてみたいと述べている。

これは、市場調査会社であるWalker Sandsによる小売改革研究によって導かれた結論のひとつである。また、30％の消費者が、もしバーチャルリアリティを使って商品を試すことができるのであれば、もっとオンラインでの買い物をしてみたいと述べている。