CHEN YI WEI (yakitoriya) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
値段交渉が可能ですか？もし可能であれば750ドルはいかがでしょうか？

修正後
入札は可能ですか？もし可能であれば750ドルはいかがでしょうか？

元の翻訳
お世話になります。こちら昨日USPSの国際郵便問合せ部門に伺いましたが、向こうはは「正式な照合要請提出できるのは発送元のみ」と返事しました。そちらが既に照合要請提出済のことを伝えると、向こうは「それでしたら、発送元の処に照合用のデータ番号は送られたはず」と言いました。宜しければその番号をこちらに送って頂けませんか？この件は長いやり取りになれらしく、いざってなった時必要と思うので。どうぞよろしくお願いいたします。

修正後
お世話になります。こちら昨日USPSの国際郵便問合せ部門と話しましたが、向こうはは「正式な照合要請提出できるのは発送元のみ」との返事でした。そちらが既に照合要請を提出していると伝えると、向こうは「それでしたら、発送元の処に照合用のデータ番号を与えられているはず」と言いました。宜しければその番号をこちらに送って頂けませんか？この件は長いやり取りになるように思われ、必要になったどきのために持っていたいので。どうぞよろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
It's duly noted about the return request.
Though the reason was be set in「4.It’s defective or doesn’t work.」, the auto-focus function couldn't available on some lenses is not caused by the defection or failure of product itself but the regular specification of converter.
Please change the reason to either「1.It’s the wrong size or doesn’t fit」or「2.I don’t need it anymore」or「3.I found a better price elsewhere」.

修正後
It's duly noted about the return request.
Though the reason was "4. It’s defective or doesn't work," the auto-focus function is not available on some lenses not because of the defect or failure of the product itself but because of the specifications of the converter.
Please change the reason to either "1. It’s the wrong size or doesn't fit"or "2. I don't need it anymore" or "3. I found a better price elsewhere."

元の翻訳
It's duly noted about the return request.
Though the reason was be set in「4.It’s defective or doesn’t work.」, the auto-focus function couldn't available on some lenses is not caused by the defection or failure of product itself but the regular specification of converter.
Please change the reason to either「1.It’s the wrong size or doesn’t fit」or「2.I don’t need it anymore」or「3.I found a better price elsewhere」.

修正後
It's duly noted about the return request.
Though the reason was be set in「4.It’s defective or doesn’t work.」, the auto-focus function couldn't be available on some lenses is not caused by the defection or failure of product itself but the regular specification of converter.
Please change the reason to either「1.It’s the wrong size or doesn’t fit」or「2.I don’t need it anymore」or「3.I found a better price elsewhere」.

元の翻訳
1.Hello.
The items has been shipped , please wait for a while due to the package be arrived.
I can handle almost all of the items which sold by Japanese , like home-appliance & groceries and etc.
Of course you can take contact with me if you are interested in re-used camera also.
I am looking forward to the next deal between us.

2.The shutter is worked good , but shutter speed was slowly . Prism finder can't works due it was broken.
The leather cover was turned up on some place.Battery Cover was hard to open it. Molt was denigrated also.

修正後
1. Hello.
The items has [s-v agreement] been shipped [use active voice]. Please wait for a while until the package arrives.
I can handle almost all of the items sold by Japanese sellers, such as home appliances, groceries [word confusion], etc.
Of course you can contact me if you are interested in used cameras also.
I am looking forward to serving you again.

2.The shutter works fine, but the shutter speed is slow. The prism finder doesn't work because it is broken.
The leather cover was turned up [unclear] on some places. The battery cover is hard to open. Molt is denigrated [unclear] also.

元の翻訳
1.Hello.
The items has been shipped , please wait for a while due to the package be arrived.
I can handle almost all of the items which sold by Japanese , like home-appliance & groceries and etc.
Of course you can take contact with me if you are interested in re-used camera also.
I am looking forward to the next deal between us.

2.The shutter is worked good , but shutter speed was slowly . Prism finder can't works due it was broken.
The leather cover was turned up on some place.Battery Cover was hard to open it. Molt was denigrated also.

修正後
1.Hello.
The items have been shipped , please wait for a while until the packages arrive.
I can handle almost all of the items which are sold by Japanese , like home-appliance & groceries and etc.
Of course you can contact me if you are interested in used cameras also.
I am looking forward to doing business with you again.

2.The shutter works well, but the shutter speed is slow. The prism finder can't work due to the fact it is broken.
The leather cover comes off in places. The battery cover is hard to open. The molt is degraded also.

元の翻訳
この前こちらが伺いてたのはグローブの発送預定時期です。
それと、もし赤いレース付きの品物ございませんでしたら、
黒いレース付きのMS-600グローブも構いません。

どうぞご確認ください。

修正後
この前こちらが伺っていたのは、グローブの発送が今週の何日になるかです。
それと、もし赤い品物がございませんでしたら、
黒い編み上げのms-600グローブでも構わない、という旨もお伝えしておりました。

どうぞご確認ください。

元の翻訳
この前こちらが伺いてたのはグローブの発送預定時期です。
それと、もし赤いレース付きの品物ございませんでしたら、
黒いレース付きのMS-600グローブも構いません。

どうぞご確認ください。

修正後
この前こちらが伺いてたのは、今週の何日にグローブが発送されるかです。
それと、もし赤いレース付きの品物ございませんでしたら、
黒いレース付きのMS-600グローブも構いません。

どうぞご確認ください。