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元の翻訳
The plate has a quite expensive-looking, and I think it's terrific.

About the option; brown looks nice,↵
but I prefer the blue.
Could you manifacture The SQ by blue?

Thank you for the great offer.

Is all the leather used in The LO vegetable tannin leather?
If there are any other obsession regarding to the leather, please let me know.
Also, tell me about the carbon fiber and the other parts used in the bag. (country of origin, manufacturing process, etc.)
The questions above are not in hurry, so please respond when you have time. Thank you.

修正後
The plate has a quite expensive-looking [noun missing], and I think it's terrific.

About the option, the brown looks nice, but I prefer the blue.
Could you manifacture [spelling] the SQ by blue?

Thank you for the great offer.

Is all the leather used in The LO vegetable tannin [spelling] leather?
If there are [s-v agreement] any other obsession [word choice] regarding the leather, please let me know.
Also, tell me about the carbon fiber and the other parts used in the bag. (country of origin, manufacturing process, etc.)
The questions above are not in hurry, so please respond when you have time. Thank you.

元の翻訳
了承致しました、あなたのご依頼を受諾します。合計金額は50個につき$1267.50です、30分以内に送り状を送付致します。
送り状を送付致しましたので、ご確認ください。

修正後
了承致しました、あなたのご提案を受諾します。合計金額は50個につき$1267.50です、30分以内に送り状を送付致します。
送り状を送付致しましたので、ご確認ください。

元の翻訳
We have checked our e-mail, but we couldn't find the e-mail about the stockout.

We will return "BDP-3200", so we ask for a positive response about the refund.
Please let us know about the procedure we must take, thank you.

修正後
We have checked our e-mails, but we couldn't find the e-mail about the out of stock.

We will return "BDP-3200", so we ask for a refund.
Please let us know about the procedure we must take, thank you.