大槻　健志 (takeshiotsuki) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
A radiation therapy technician delivers radiation. The radiation therapy technician follows courses of treatment on which a radiation oncologist decides, and accurately sends radiation toward only the parts which is ill. External radiation is treated in a radiation treatment room where a linear accelerator is set. The radiation therapy technician sends radiation toward skins which are marked by the courses of treatment and signs of fixing tools. In the first radiation, the patients are taken photos called adjusting positions to confirm whether the parts, which are decided by the courses of treatment can match the parts of skins and the signs of fixing tools.

修正後
A radiation therapy technician delivers radiation. The radiation therapy technician follows courses of treatment on which a radiation oncologist decides, and accurately sends radiation toward only the parts which is ill. External radiation is treated in a radiation treatment room where a linear accelerator is set. The radiation therapy technician sends radiation toward skins which are marked by the courses of treatment, and signs of fixing tools. In the first radiation, the patients are taken photos called adjusting positions to confirm whether the parts, which are decided by the courses of treatment can match the parts of skins and the signs of fixing tools.

元の翻訳
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Regarding the refund, I have confirmed with Paypal
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元の翻訳
商品の送付に何らかの問題が生じているようです。当方の追跡データによれば、荷物に記載された住所に何らかの誤りがあるため届いていないとのことです。DHLの追跡番号を控えておりますでしょうか。運送会社に連絡し、荷物の追跡をお願いしてみてください。

修正後
商品の送付に何らかの問題が生じているようです。当方の追跡データによれば、荷物に記載された住所に何らかの誤りがあるため届いていないとのことです。DHLの追跡番号の控えはありますか？ＤＨＬに連絡し、荷物の所在を確かめてみます。

元の翻訳
It is revealed that an planning and operating business of exhibition (including a trade show) has been posted on the Japan Standard Industrial Classification, which is used as a basic material of the economic structure in the nation and the economic ripple effect analysis on April 1st.

An exhibition industry insists voluntarily that it is an important industry to generate large economic effects, but its position as an industry is unclear.

This time, "planning and operating business of exhibition (including a trade show) " has been stated in the Japan Standard Industrial Classification. As a result, the business such as an exhibition has been admitted objectively as an industry which conducts economic activities.

修正後
It is revealed on 1st April that the planning and operating business of exhibition (including a trade show) has been published in the Japan Standard Industrial Classification, which is used as a basic material for analyzing the economic structure in the nation and the economic ripple effect.

The exhibition industry has insisted voluntarily that it is an important industry to generate large economic effects, but its position as an industry has been unclear.

This time, "planning and operating business of exhibition (including a trade show) " is published in the Japan Standard Industrial Classification. As a result, the exhibition business will be admitted objectively as an industry which conducts economic activities.

元の翻訳
INFORMATION: About the prize A:『TREE』 The Release commemoration for a buyer limitation event.

<In Osaka>
■Osaka venues: The theater Orix.
■Date: March 27, 2014 (Thursday)
First stage. Open: at 16:00/ Curtain at 17:00
Second stage. Open: at 19:00/ Curtain at 20:00

<In Tokyo>
■Osaka venues: Tokyo international forum / Hall A
■Date: March 28, 2014 (Friday)
First stage. Open: at 16:00/ Curtain at 17:00
Second stage. Open: at 19:00/ Curtain at 20:00

<Content of the event>
A short life and talk shows.
※ It does not plan to announce the details other than the above. We would appreciate your understanding.

修正後
INFORMATION: About the prize A:『TREE』 The Release commemoration for a buyer limitation event.

< Osaka>
■Venues: The theater Orix.
■Date: March 27, 2014 (Thursday)
First stage. Open at 16:00/ Curtain at 17:00
Second stage. Open at 19:00/ Curtain at 20:00

<Tokyo>
■Venues: Tokyo international forum / Hall A
■Date: March 28, 2014 (Friday)
First stage. Open at 16:00/ Curtain at 17:00
Second stage. Open at 19:00/ Curtain at 20:00

<Content of the event>
A short live performance and a talk show.
※ It does not plan to announce the details other than the above. We would appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
High-precision radiotherapy is capable of minimizing body burdens in patients, by locating the tumor in a three-dimensional image and by attacking the cancer cells efficiently with minimal side effects on healthy tissue.

Stereotactic radiation therapy delivers sufficiently intensive radiation to cancer cells, by delivering radiations from various angles to the cancer cells and by minimizing radiation on healthy tissue. Furthermore by taking a image of the cone beam CT (CBCT) which is one of image-guided radiation therapy technologies, high-precision position detection is possible.

修正後
High-precision radiotherapy is capable of minimizing body burdens in patients, by locating the tumor in a three-dimensional image and by attacking the cancer cells efficiently with minimal side effects on healthy tissue.

Stereotactic radiation therapy delivers sufficiently intensive radiation to cancer cells, by delivering radiations from various angles to the cancer cells and by minimizing radiation on healthy tissue. Furthermore by taking a image of the cone beam CT (CBCT) which is one of the image-guided radiation therapy (IGRT) technologies, high-precision position detection is possible.