Kai Le (soulsensei) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I would like you to adjust the electric voltage of the 3W LED so that I can use with circuit of series of 8 to 12 main elements.
In case of this, is additional cost needed?

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I would like you to adjust the electric voltage of the 3W LED so that I can use 8 to 12 main elements and connect them to form a series circuit?
In this case, is an additional cost needed?

元の翻訳
We came here from the Los Angeles Airport by car and stayed overnight.
The host was very kind and his explanation was easy to understand.
It was my first experience to use the AB, but I did not have to worry.
The room was spacious enough even for 3 people, and we were lucky
to have the beer and coca cola in the refrigerator at free of charge.
The bed and sheet were clean, and we did not find any problem.
If I have a chance to stay in Los Angeles next time, I would like to stay here.
I would also like to recommend it to those who stay here.

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We came here from the Los Angeles International Airport by car and stayed overnight.
The host was very kind and his explanation was easy to understand.
It was my first experience to use the AB, but I did not have to worry.
The room was spacious enough even for 3 people, and we were lucky
to have the beer and coca cola in the refrigerator free of charge.
The bed and sheets were clean, and we did not find any problem.
If I have a chance to stay in Los Angeles next time, I would like to stay here again.
I would also like to recommend it to those who plan to stay in Los Angeles.

元の翻訳
Silicone is used for a wide range of things, such as grease / oil and cosmetics. Organic silicone volatilizes low-molecular-weight siloxane in some use environments and generates oxidation silicone on the contact surface of the switch. This oxidation silicone becomes a noncurrent carrying object for the switch, so its use is restricted at switch components as well as the manufacturing process.

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Silicone is used for a wide range of things, such as grease / oil and cosmetics. Organic silicone volatilizes low-molecular-weight siloxane in its operating environment and generates oxidized silicone on the contact surface of the switch. This oxidized silicone becomes a non-conductor of electricity for the switch, so its use is restricted to switch components as well as the manufacturing process.

元の翻訳
I put wrong numbers for the trucking number by mistake.

I am sorry for the late reply.

I heard from the storehouse and I'm afraid this item has been sold out.
I am sorry that I kept you expecting.
Would you mind if I give you a refund via PayPal as soon as possible?
I'll be waiting for your reply.
Thank you very much.

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I put the wrong number for the tracking number by mistake.

I am sorry for the late reply.

I heard from the storehouse and I'm afraid this item has been sold out.
I am sorry that I wasn't able to fulfill your expectations.
Would you mind if I give you a refund via PayPal as soon as possible?
I'll be waiting for your reply.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
My name is X, and I manage a musical instrument store in Japan.
I plan to attend the N show next year.
We are not an instrument manufacturer, so we do not plan to set up a booth. Our purpose is to talk business.
We would like to take a look at ones from the US and around the world and find ones that appeal to Japan’s market.

The other day we obtained an account here.
Three of us will come from Japan.
We need to buy batches. Please tell me how to register and how to proceed.
Please tell me what to do next.
Thank you.

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My name is X, and I manage a musical instrument store in Japan.
I plan to attend the N show next year.
We are not an instrument manufacturer, so we do not plan to set up a booth. Our purpose is to talk business.
We would like to take a look at ones from the US and around the world and find ones that appeal to Japan’s market.

The other day we obtained an account here.
Other than me, three of my associates will come from Japan.
We need to buy batches. Please tell me how to register and how to proceed.
Please tell me what to do next.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am * and manage a musical instrument store in Japan.
I am going to visit N show next year.
We are not a musical instrument maker so the purpose of the visit is not running a booth but is business meeting.
I will look around the US and worldwide products and wish to find salable products in Japanese market.

Recently I have got an account here.
Three people with me are going to visit from Japan.
I think we need to buy a batch but I do not know where and how to register.
Please give me your advice what I have to do next.

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I am * and manage a musical instrument store in Japan.
I am going to visit the N show next year.
We are not a musical instrument maker, so the purpose of the visit is not to run a booth but to have a business meeting.
I will look around products from the US and the world and wish to find products that will sell well in the Japanese market.

Recently I got an account here.
Three people are going with me to visit from Japan.
I think we need to buy a batch but I do not know where and how to register.
Please give me your advice on what I have to do next.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your kind support this year.
I am very grateful for having met you and worked with you.
I believe this business will further progress next year, and I will do my best.
May the holiday break and the new year will bring prosperty to you and your family

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Thank you very much for your kind support this year.
I am very grateful to have met you and worked together with you.
I believe this business will make significant progress next year, and I will do my best.
May the holiday break and upcoming new year bring prosperty to you and your family.

元の翻訳
That doesn't happen to me.
But I think that this site is slow to load and the support system is pretty bad.
It's difficult to tell what kind of bug was fixed as well.
I just think they are unprofessional in so many ways.
By the way, I noticed that the demonstration site Adsense was banned. I mean its understandable because its breaching the contract but still.

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That doesn't happen to me.
But I think that this site is slow to load and the support system is pretty bad.
It's difficult to tell what kind of bug was fixed as well.
I just think they are unprofessional in so many ways.
By the way, I noticed that the demonstration site Adsense was banned. I mean it's understandable because it's breaching the contract but still.

元の翻訳
Good day!

Thank you for your inquiry.
I have not received the items.
Have you received the items?
I am waiting for your confirmation.

Thank you for your purchase at our shop.
I would like to inform you that delivery are delayed due to holiday season according to the other customers.
It usually takes less than one month, but it may take about two months.
I will take care of this dealing till the end.

I apologize for my inconvenience caused by delay.
Please kindly wait for a while.

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Good day!

Thank you for your inquiry.
The items have not been returned to me.
Have you received the items yet?
I am waiting for your confirmation.

Thank you for your purchase at our shop.
Based on feedback from other customers, I would like to inform you that the delivery of items is delayed due to the holiday season.
Delivery usually takes less than one month, but it may take about two months now.
I will take care of this transaction till the end.

I apologize for any inconvenience caused by the delay.
Please kindly wait for a while.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your service.
Apologies for the belated response.
I confirmed the $6.64 refund.
Appreciate the full refund.
Thank you.
I will order again!

I will rate with 5 stars for the feedback.
I am assured to make a transaction with your store.
Thank you so much.


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They have duly taken care of the refund for me.
This is a trustworthy shop that I can rest assured to shop.

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Thank you for your service.
Apologies for the belated response.
I confirmed the $6.64 refund.
Appreciate the full refund.
Thank you.
I will order again!

I also left a rating of 5 stars on the feedback form.
I am assured to make a transaction with your store.
Thank you so much.


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You have duly taken care of the refund for me.
Your shop is a trustworthy one that enables me to shop with peace of mind.