米納　良司 (ryojiyono) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you so much for purchasing large qty.
I still have 60 of 〇 on top of what already sold and what is on sale now.

If you are interested in purchasing more, it will be $3.5 each.
Also if you wish to have new one, we can sell more than 60.
In that case, please let us know how much qty you would like,
and we will send you the invoice.

Items what you purhcased will be shipped as one package with shipping insurance.
I also will send the trucking number of the package.

Thank you

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Thank you so much for purchasing large qty.
I still have 60 of 〇 on top of what already sold and what is on sale now.

If you are interested in purchasing more, it will be $3.5 each.
Also if you wish to order further more, I will be able to get new one so that we can sell more than 60.
In that case, please let us know how much qty you would like,
and we will send you the invoice.

Items what you purchased will be shipped as one package with shipping insurance.
I also will send the trucking number of the package.

Thank you

元の翻訳
論争の問題は合意されました。



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以下ごご確認ください。
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元の翻訳
The source is as following. (This is the article was posted in February 2013 on the official blog of ABC)

It is written near the end. They worried over the continued activity but decided to go ahead with is and in the end went over board is what is written.

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The source is as following. (This is the article was posted in February 2013 on the official blog of ABC)

It is written near the end. It is written that they worried over the continued activity but decided to go ahead with it to the end.

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6th November (Wednesday) Limited Edition Koda Kumi's [Happy Love Song Collection 2014] album would be released!

6th November (Wednesday) Limited Edition Koda Kumi's [Happy Love Song Collection 2014] album will be released!
Koda Kumi's June Bride and ten famous songs that people would love to hear in summer hear are all in this album.

Limited Edition delivery lasts till 26 August 2014

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11th June (Wednesday) Limited Edition Koda Kumi's [Happy Love Song Collection 2014] album would be released!

11th June (Wednesday) Limited Edition Koda Kumi's [Happy Love Song Collection 2014] album will be released!
Koda Kumi's June Bride and ten famous songs that people would love to hear in summer hear are all in this album.

Limited Edition delivery lasts till 26 August 2014

元の翻訳
Thank you for the nice offer. I'm considering of purchasing those products, but my PayPal account has been sentenced for examination since a couple days ago. The person in charge of the examination told me that it had to be done due to my recent transaction with a large amount of money. It seems that the examination will take a few days, so by the beginning of August, my PayPal account would be reactivated and I would be able to send you money. Could you please wait until then?

Best regards,

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Thank you for the nice offer. I'm considering of purchasing those products, but my PayPal account has been put on hold for examination since a couple days ago. The person in charge of the examination told me that it had to be done due to my recent transaction with a large amount of money. It seems that the examination will take a few days, so by the beginning of August, my PayPal account would be reactivated and I would be able to send you money. Could you please wait until then?

Best regards,

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that I am not good at English.
I would like to clean up the information.↵
I will buy it again, so please tell me about Tour Issue SLDR Head( Toe Screw)↵
Looking forward to your reply

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I apologize for the inconvenience caused by my poor English.
As I need to organize the information again, please let me know Tour Issue SLDR Head (Toe Screw) that is available to purchase right now.↵
I am positive about the purchase and I would appreciate your response in advance.

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#ill

We apologize for the inconvenience caused by my poor English.
I would like to process the information.↵
So would you tell me again Tour Issue SLDR Head(Toe Screw) that I can purchase right now.
I am optimistic about the purchase so I would appreciate your response in advance.

Thank you.

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#ill

I apologize for the inconvenience caused by my poor English.
As I need to organize the information again, please let me know Tour Issue SLDR Head (Toe Screw) that is available to purchase right now.
I am positive about the purchase and I would appreciate your response in advance.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
New/Unopened item, however the package has a small amount of scuffing, scatches and dents etc please understand this point before purchase. I will send the package via BOON (Yamato Delivery) immediately.
Thank you.

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New/Unopened item, however the package has a small amount of scuffing, scatches and dents etc. Please understand this point before purchase. I will send the package via BOON (Yamato Delivery) immediately.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Even though those are new unopened products please notice that there might be slight scars, scratches or bends. Only purchase if that is ok for you.
We will ship it by BOON as soon as possible.
The weather is nice today.

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Even though those are new unopened products please notice that there might be slight scars, scratches or bends on package. Only purchase if that is ok for you.
We will ship it by HAKO BOON as soon as possible.
The weather is nice today.

元の翻訳
Daughter: What brought you here? You damn old woman!
Woman: Well, just for greeting. Who would ever want to come to this kind of house? I came because your brother brought me here.
Brother: Even you said that...!
Woman: Couldn't do without alcohol if talking about children.
Daughter: You, still an old woman with a Paprika brain!
Woman: You have been such an annoying kid! You loathful one wouldn't be an old woman one day? Don't you know that it's boring when scolding without variation of words?


Yes. That was it.
That was the poem I got from my grandmather who passed away...
I haven't told any words to anyone yet!
As I said, I moved.

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Daughter: What brought you here? You damn old woman!
Woman: Well, just for greeting. Who would ever want to come to this kind of house? I came because your brother brought me here.
Brother: Even you said that...!
Woman: Couldn't do without alcohol if talking about children.
Daughter: You, still an old woman with an empty brain like a bell pepper!
Woman: You have been such an annoying kid! You loathful one wouldn't be an old woman one day? Don't you know that it's boring when scolding without variation of words?


Yes. That was it.
That was the poem I got from my grandmather who passed away...
I haven't told any words to anyone yet!
As I said, I moved.