Nga Hoang (nguyenpham) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
We have almost no sales of A as there are rival companies which sell A on the lower price. Therefore the next order in not fixed.

If we order from you next time, it will be 50 each of size S and size M.

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We have almost no sales of A as there are rival companies which sell A with the lower price. Therefore, the next order is undecided.

If we order in the next time, it will be 50 each of size S and size M.↵

元の翻訳
Hello. This is Suzuki, an Amazon seller.
Thank you for purchasing the item listed below on Amazon.com.

I am e-mailing you because when the package arrived to your address, no one was available at the time and it was sent to be stored at the postal office.
*If you have already visited the office, I am sorry for this unnecessary information.

There should be a delivery notice in your mail box. Please visit the postal office or give them a call for a delivery.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Hello. This is Suzuki, an Amazon seller.
Thank you for purchasing the item listed below on Amazon.com.

I am e-mailing you because when the package arrived to your address, but no one was available at the time and it was sent to be stored at the postal office.
*If you have already visited the office, I am sorry for this unnecessary information.

There should be a delivery notice in your mail box. Please visit the postal office or give them a call for a delivery.

Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
With all the information above, for the main activity,

I would like you to set a goal to create a work which Gold town can be seen as a "base point."
For example, in the case of the work which is showing that to go out to different town from the house in Gold town, try to indicate that it started or finished at Gold town by showing that you came back to the Gold town station or something like that.
Of course you can take it only in Gold town.
I would like you to work with those preconditions all mentioned above.

Other detailed rules and points are below.

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With all the information above, for the main activity,

I would like you to set a goal to create a work which Gold town can be seen as a "base point."
For example, in the case of the work which is showing that to go out to different town from the house in Gold town, try to indicate that it started or finished at Gold town by showing that you came back to the Gold town station or something like that.
Of course you can take it only in Gold town.
I would like you to work with those preconditions all mentioned above.

Other detail about rules and points are below.

元の翻訳
Apologies to often bother you on your busy schedule.

Were you were able to confirm our order?

Because we are already running low on stock , we would like to place
an order at the soonest time possible.


I am listing the items to be ordered together with the quantities below,
so can you contact me once you come up with the estimates?


In addition, there is an impression that there are a lot of initial defects on this product.
Upon purchasing twenty, there would definitely be one with an initial defect.

Is this normal?

Can you tell me if there is a solution for this?

Since I will be doing business with you in the future, I thought it might be good to ask this.

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I apologies to often bother you on your busy schedule.

Were you were able to confirm our order?

Because we are already running low on stock , we would like to place
an order at the soonest time possible.


I am listing the items to be ordered together with the quantities below,
so can you contact me once you come up with the estimates time?


In addition, there is an impression that there are a lot of initial defects on this product.
Upon purchasing twenty, there would definitely be one with an initial defect.

Is this normal?

Can you tell me if there is a solution for this?

Since I will be doing business with you in the future, I thought it might be good to ask this.

元の翻訳
It's appears in the INBOX, How do I calculate the amount of declared?
Something is very different. So do not count all.
I want you to stop and writing appropriately. In addition, there is a trend that the purchase price always higher than your company.

I would like to correct the invoice as follows. Thank you.↵

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It's appears in the INBOX, How do I calculate the amount of declared?
Something is very different. So do not count all.
I would like you to be more careful in writing these numbers. In addition, there is a trend that the purchase price always higher than your company.

I would like to correct the invoice as follows. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.

Probably, that product would not with the defective article.

Anyway, if you feel inconvenient when using it, please return.

We will refund all of the product price and postage to Japan.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Probably, that product would not with the defective article.

Anyway, if you feel inconvenient when using it, please return.

We will refund all of the product price and postage fees to Japan.

元の翻訳
It was my miss that I was not able to return the product I've purchased from you. I am paying the shipping charges again, so if you receive the products, please ship to a different location.

I will send it back to your address immediately so please tell me the return address.

Please contact when it arrives.

Thank you.

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It was my mistake that I was not able to return the product I've purchased from you. I am paying the shipping charges again, so if you receive the products, please ship to a different location.

I will send it back to your address immediately so please tell me the return address.

Please contact when it arrives.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
To mom
Happy your 60 birthdays
Gave birth to us, thanks for the maximum that you brought up
Do not overwork and take care of yourself
Your Children

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To mom
Happy your 60 birthdays
Gave birth to us, thanks for the maximum that you brought up
Do not overwork and take care of your health
Your Children

元の翻訳
To mother
Happy 60 years old
Thanks very much for gave birth to us and for everything that you brought up
Please take care of health.
Your children

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To mother
Happy 60th birthday
Thanks very much for gave birth to us and for everything that you brought up.
Please take care of health.
Your children

元の翻訳
We are checking the camera before exhibition, but it may be an oversight. I will propose a solution to this problem. First, ask an estimate of repair and bring to the store the camera. I need you presented to me for a quote price for repair, as long as the repair rate is not too high, we will refund this amount. For example, if there is no shop for repair, if it is not possible to this solution, please return the camera. I will have a full refund when I received the camera. The carriage return, if it is possible to charge via PayPal, I will pay for it.

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We are checking the camera before exhibition, but it may be an oversight. I will propose a solution to this problem. First, ask an estimate of repair and bring to the store the camera. I need you presented to me for a quote price for repair, as long as the repair rate is not too high, we will refund this amount. For example, if there is no shop for repair, if it is not possible to this solution, please return the camera. I will have a full refund when I received the camera. The carriage return, if it is possible to charge via PayPal, I will pay the shipping charge for the return of the product

元の翻訳
・No abnormal number was detected during communication test and from the log contents, and a equivalent communication bandwith (2Mbps) was made.
・When an abnormality occurs next time, it has been agreed to make a scheme to pursue the cause and make an action plan between the person in charge.

[Next Action]
1) Recent countermeasure (for particular user)
a) replace the PC and check the condition
2) Recent countermeasure (for all user)
a) When the copmmunication becoming slow, user need to inform below content to Mr Eric.
・target user (particular or all user)

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・No abnormal number was detected during communication test and from the log contents, and an equivalent communication bandwidth (2Mbps) was made.
・When an abnormality occurs next time, it has been agreed to make a scheme to pursue the cause and make an action plan between the person in charge.

[Next Action]
1) Recent countermeasure (for particular user)
a) Replace the PC and check the condition
2) Recent countermeasure (for all users)
a) When the communication becoming slow, user need to inform below content to Mr Eric.
・target user (particular or all users)