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元の翻訳
【「TREE」 (The first board) a buyer-limited application privilege】
The prize A:『TREE』 The Release commemoration for a buyer limitation event.
The prize B:The Release commemoration panel (personally signed) present.
The prize C:The Wooden key ring present.
※You can choose the prize A or B or C and request us by one serial number.↵
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[If you purchase a copy of the first-run edition of "Tree", you have a chance to win:]
Prize A: an invitation to an exclusive event for album owners commemorating the release of "Tree"
Prize B: an autographed plaque for the commemoration of the release of "Tree"
Prize C: a wooden key ring
*With one serial number you have a chance to win one of the three prizes. Choose among prizes A, B and C when you apply.

元の翻訳
INFORMATION: About the prize A:『TREE』 The Release commemoration for a buyer limitation event.

<In Osaka>
■Osaka venues: The theater Orix.
■Date: March 27, 2014 (Thursday)
First stage. Open: at 16:00/ Curtain at 17:00
Second stage. Open: at 19:00/ Curtain at 20:00

<In Tokyo>
■Osaka venues: Tokyo international forum / Hall A
■Date: March 28, 2014 (Friday)
First stage. Open: at 16:00/ Curtain at 17:00
Second stage. Open: at 19:00/ Curtain at 20:00

<Content of the event>
A short life and talk shows.
※ It does not plan to announce the details other than the above. We would appreciate your understanding.

修正後
INFORMATION: About the prize A:『TREE』 The Release commemoration for a buyer limitation event.

< Osaka>
■Venues: The theater Orix.
■Date: March 27, 2014 (Thursday)
First stage. Open at 16:00/ Curtain at 17:00
Second stage. Open at 19:00/ Curtain at 20:00

<Tokyo>
■Venues: Tokyo international forum / Hall A
■Date: March 28, 2014 (Friday)
First stage. Open at 16:00/ Curtain at 17:00
Second stage. Open at 19:00/ Curtain at 20:00

<Content of the event>
A short live performance and a talk show.
※ It does not plan to announce the details other than the above. We would appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
< Identity document with your face photo >
1. Passport.
2.Drivers license.
3.Basic Resident Register card with your face photo.
4.Physical disability certificate.
5.Foreigner Registration Card (Residency Card).
6.Credit card with your face photo.
7.Student ID with your face photo.　

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< Identity certificate with your face photo >
1. Passport.
2.Drivers license.
3.Basic Resident Register card with your face photo.
4.Physical disability certificate.
5.Foreigner Registration Card (Residency Card).
6.Credit card with your face photo.
7.Student ID with your face photo.