ゆかり (lizchen050517) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Sorry for my late reply.
I went to UK for business trip last week.
And I will go to many places in Europe from next week to 27th.

About business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28th?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

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Sorry for my late reply.
I was in UK on business last week.
And I will be flying back to other spots in Europe for another business trip next week till 27th.

About the business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

元の翻訳
Sorry for my late reply.
I went to UK for business trip last week.
And I will go to many places in Europe from next week to 27th.

About business meeting with you, could you arrange some available dates after 11/28th?
I am looking forward to meet with you.

修正後
Sorry for my late reply.
I went to UK on business trip last week.
And I will visit several places in Europe on business from next week to 27th.

About a business meeting with you, could you arrange it on your available dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to meeting you.

元の翻訳
We are waiting for 2 products.
We still haven't reveived one of them after one month.
Please tell me the respective arrival time.

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We are waiting for 2 products to arrive.
We still haven't reveived one of them that was ordered over a month ago.
Please tell me the respective delivery time.

元の翻訳
I travelled Tokyo with the request of my friend who is transferred overseas for long term.
The weather was great and the feeling of whirling wind while sitting in the SKY HOP bus made me felt comfortable.
Although I live in Tokyo, but I've found a new Tokyo with the guide.
My mood turned better by travelling, shopping and having lunch.
A date makes me happy even it's with family.
We chose one from three course and we want to enjoy other courses next time!

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I traveled to Tokyo at the request of my friend who will be transferred overseas for long term.
The weather was great and the feeling of whirling wind while sitting in the SKY HOP bus felt comfortable.
Although I live in Tokyo, but I've found a new Tokyo with the guide.
My mood turned better by sightseeing, shopping and having lunch.
I think it would be enjoyable whether it is a date or it is with family.
We chose one from three courses today, but I want to enjoy other courses next time!

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.
I've checked the EMS tracking number and it has arrivaled at your country.
It's now clearing by customs.

Please check by the URL:

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Sorry for the late reply.
I've checked the EMS tracking number and it has arrived at your country.
It's being cleared by customs now.

You can check the status from below link:

元の翻訳
Alibabaは50000元から始まった。Bezos氏は両親から30万ドルを借りてアマゾンを設立した。

ビジネス事業が始まる前に、Ma氏は英語教師でした。Bezos氏はアイビー・リーグの学校に卒業した。

”無計画”（もっと深く所まで行った）のMa氏と比べると、Bezos氏は精密な計画作成者です。2009年の短ビデオにより、Zapposを手にいてた後で、Bezos氏は”分かることに限り”とアウトラインした。お客にとっての魅力、投資と長期化の考えがリストに含まれている。

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Alibabaは50000元から始まった。約8150米ドルに相当する。Bezos氏は両親から30万米ドルを借りてアマゾンを設立した。

ビジネス事業を始める前、Ma氏は英語教師でした。Bezos氏はアイビー・リーグの学校を卒業した。

”無計画”（もっと深く述べているのだが）のMa氏と対照的に、Bezos氏は精密な計画作成者です。2009年のショートビデオで、Zapposの買収後、Bezos氏は”自分が知っているのは次のことだけだ”と概要を説明した。顧客を魅了すること、発明すること、長期的に思考すること、がリストに含まれている。

元の翻訳
Thanks for you e-mail.

We are looking for LEGO's supplier.
We want to purchase from other LEGO.
Are your looking for wholesale dealer?

LEGO is very popular in Japanese so our business won't be continuous without the superiority of price.

Can you search for wholesale dealer except dolls?
For example, dress, home electricity, sports and so on.

If you can provide a good price, ↵
we hope to make a great quantity of purchases with you.

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Thanks for you e-mail.

We are looking for LEGO's supplier.
We want to purchase from other LEGO [mistranslation].
Are your looking for a wholesale dealer [mistranslation]?

LEGO is very popular in Japan so our business won't be continuous without the superiority of price [awkward].

Can you search for wholesale dealers except dolls [mistranslation]?
For example, dress, home electricity, sports and so on.

If you can provide a good price, we hope to make a great quantity of purchases with you.

元の翻訳
We don't have shop by now.
Our office is located in the fashionable street called Jiyuaoka in Tokyo.
We are planning to open a shop next year but by now, we are more focusing on internet selling.

The rich people make up of our main targets.
For example, the link below is under running by us.

Normal products will not satisfy our clients.
They have continous pursits of products with high-value.
Products specially designed and can be as present are more requested by our clients.

We having and knowing great products becomes standard for them.

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We don't have shop by now.
Our office is located in the fashionable street called Jiyuaoka in Tokyo.
We are planning to open a shop next year but as of now we are more focusing on internet selling.

The rich people make up of our main targets.
For example, the link below is under running by us.

Normal products will not satisfy our clients.
They have continous pursits of products with high-value.
Products specially for decoration and for present are more requested by our clients.

We having and knowing great products becomes standard for them.