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元の翻訳
このオメガシーマスターオーシャンプラネットの価格は素晴らしい。どこで入手したのでしょう？私は時計を購入して届いたら、箱とシリアルナンバーが完全か確認しています。私はこの時計の証明書を確認したいです。もしこのオメガの証明書が正しくないと思った時、貴方は返品についてどのような考えをお持ちですか？

修正後
このオメガシーマスターオーシャンプラネットの価格は素晴らしい。付属品は何でしょう？高額の買い物ですので、正規品であることについてどのように保証してもらえるのか、そして時計が箱やシリアルなどの付属品も完全に備えた状態なのかが知りたいです。オメガに正規品であるかどうかを確認したいです。また、もしオメガがこれを本物でないと判断したときの、本商品の返品についての規定も、どうなっているのか教えてください。

元の翻訳
This ticket is only available at the day.
You can not enter the events which are held in Yoyogi National Stadium Yoyogi Gymnasiums 1 and 2. You need to pat additional fee for enter those events.
This ticket is not confirming for the priority seat of the fashion shows and for advanced entry to the shopping moles. You can buy one day pass at the day in the event place.

※The schedule of those event may be changed or cancelled by bad weather condition and decision by the organizer. Please understand.

修正後
This ticket is only available at the day.
You can not enter the events which are held in Yoyogi National Stadium Yoyogi Gymnasiums 1 and 2. You need to pay additional fee for entering those events.
This ticket is not confirming for the priority seat of the fashion shows and for advanced entry to the shopping malls. You can buy one day pass at the day in the event place.

※The schedule of those event may be changed or cancelled by bad weather condition and decision by the organizer. Please understand.

元の翻訳
Regarding your application to use our campany's meeting space.

Unfortunately we have only the application fomat written in Japanese.

You can ask Tanaka-san for filling two fomat. it is no proalem.

After submit those to us, you can use the meeting space in a week.

修正後
On the matter of your application to use our campany's meeting space:

If Tanaka-san has to do is submit the two formats written in Japanese and the other language, there is no probelm.

Although we need to simultaneoulsly receive two application fomats written in Japanese and the specified language, you have submitted only the Japanese format.

After submitting the set of the formants to us, the meeting space will be available in a week.

元の翻訳
Regarding your application to use our campany's meeting space.
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Unfortunately we have only the application fomat written in Japanese.↵

You can ask Tanaka-san for filling two fomat. it is no proalem.↵
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After submit those to us, you can use the meeting space in a week.

修正後
This is regarding your application to use our campany's meeting space.
Please fill out the attached application forms and submit it.
Unfortunately these forms are available in Japanese only.↵
Please have Tanaka-san to fill out and submit those two forms and it should be all set.↵
A week after submission, the meeting space will be available for use.

元の翻訳
The amount of extra benefit is limted. Person who buy CD/DVD and goods will be worked by and gave by uring same lottely instrument. Please understand the extra benfit may be gone before the end of time for selling goods.

■Caution
Please do not ask a question to the event place.
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Amount of selling CD on the day and extra benefit is limited. Please understand we will finsh to sell it when we have no stock.

修正後
The amount [word choice] of extra benefit is limted. Person who buy [s-v agreement] CD/DVD and goods will be worked by [What does this mean?] and gave [tense confusion] by uring [?] same lottely instrument [?]. Please understand the extra benfit may be gone before the end of time for selling goods [awkward].

■Caution
*抽選会は会場の都合上、順番待ちのお客様がいらっしゃる状況でも終了となる場合がございます。↵
*Please do not ask a question to the event place.
*Amount of selling CD [singular?] on the day and extra benefit is limited. Please understand we will finsh to sell it when we have no stock.

元の翻訳
お返事が遅れましてまことに申し訳ございません。実は、36時間前に私の娘を救急病院に連れて行き、その後病院に娘と一緒に降りました。ただいま帰宅したところでございます。はい、もちろんソフィアが貴方にされたことにつうては私はベトを尽くす所存でございます。彼が作成したとてもすばらしいまっすぐで眉毛の長さに近い43番ゲージの針を使います。私でイングランドから購入することのできるソフィアとヘッジのベアキットが届くのをお待ちしております。それらが今週届く事を祈っております。リリアンと髪の脇につけるものを仕上げました↵
。また、ふさふさの髪を持つルカ用の髪を明日40番ゲージの針と同じ厚さと使用の針を使って仕上げます。

修正後
お返事が遅れましてまことに申し訳ございません。実は、36時間前に私の娘を救急病院に連れて行き、その後病院に娘と一緒におりました。ただいま帰宅したところでございます。はい、もちろんソフィアについて貴方にお願いされたことについては私はベストを尽くす所存でございます。彼が作成したとてもすばらしいまっすぐで眉毛の長さに近い43番ゲージの針を使います。私はイングランドから購入することのできるソフィアとヘッジのベアキットが届くのをお待ちしております。それらが今週届く事を祈っております。リリアンと髪の脇につけるものを仕上げました。また、ふさふさの髪を持つルカ用の髪を明日40番ゲージの針と同じ厚さと使用の針を使って仕上げます。

元の翻訳
Japan Assosiation for the Promotion of Creative events(JACE) has rereased 「The infential stapics report of size of market of event in 2014」.

in the report, the market size of event in 2014 is assumed to 3 trillion 8374 billion JPY. It is assumed by only picking up the payment in the pavillion of total waste of guest.

Moreover, the variety of payment (before visiting pavillion, transpoptation fee, staying hote, outside pavillionl and after visiting) by expanding the idea of payment is assumed to 15 trillion 1444 billion JPY.

修正後
Japan Assosiation for the Promotion of Creative events (JACE) has released "The report on estimated event market size in 2014".

in the report, the market size of event in 2014 is assumed to 3.8374 trillion JPY. It is assumed by only picking up the payment in the pavillion within total spending by guests.

Moreover, the variety of payment (before visiting pavillion, transportation fee, staying hotel, outside pavillion and after visiting) by expanding the idea of payment is assumed to 15.1444 trillion JPY.