A. de Guzman (kamitoki) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Your item has been shipped from the Global Shipping Center on august 18.
please wait a while until it arrives.
The checking of its status until it arrives is being carried out in the attached screen.
Hoping for your kindness.

修正後
Your item was shipped from the Global Shipping Center on August 18.
Please wait a while until it arrives.
The checking of its status until it arrives is being carried out in the attached screen.
Hoping for your kindness.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the reply.
So what should we do as the next step?
Should I make the very first order?
Or shall we acquire your company's trademark first?

修正後
Thank you for the reply.
So what should we do for the next step?
Should I make the very first order?
Or shall we acquire the trademark of your items first?

元の翻訳
I read the note about my daughter's injury from the nurse. During school playtime she was kicked by John then rolled around and fell and hurt herself, she said. It became a big wound. Also actually this isn't the first time I heard the boy's name. Please check the truth of what happened yesterday.

修正後
I read the note about my daughter's injury from the nurse. During school playtime she was kicked by John then rolled around and fell and hurt herself, she said. It became a big wound. Also actually this isn't the first time I heard his name. Please check the truth of what happened yesterday.

元の翻訳
友達が言ったように私は少なくとも一度試したいと思います。役が立てなければ仕様がなくて返品にして返金を願います。いいでしょうか。

修正後
友達が言ったように私は少なくとも一度試したいと思います。役に立たなければ仕様がなくて返品して返金を願います。いいでしょうか。

元の翻訳
Tony, who loves to listen to stories, will lends an ear anytime and will even help with homework.↵
I recommend him to those who think a homestay who only stays in their room is not a homestay at all, and to those who want to talk in English after arriving here at long last.
The staymate is Japanese but there are times when he helps too when the situation is reversed.
Not knowing much English but wanting very much to talk... are the type of people that are most welcome.

Also, people who worry about what they should do now that they're in Japan, and people who are in a complicated situation at their current homestay, do please give us a call.

修正後
Tony, who loves listening to others talk, will be a good companion to you and ready to help you with your homework. A home stay where you keep remaining inside your room cannot be a genuine home stay. This is recommended for those who have taken the trouble to come here to talk in English.
The stay mate is a Japanese, but there are times when he helps too when the situation is reversed.
Not knowing much English but wanting very much to talk... are the type of people that are most welcome.

Also, people who worry about what they should do now that they're in Japan, and people who are in a complicated situation at their current home stay, please give us a call.

元の翻訳
I am extremely sorry for contacting you so late.
My child is sick so I took a leave.
I'm sorry that I have inconvenienced you.

First of all, I would like to understand the situation. Could you send me photographs?
was the packaging material damaged when the items arrived?
I think a refund of 60 dollars is doable just as you proposed.
Looking forward to your reply.

修正後
I am extremely sorry for contacting you so late.
My child was sick so I took a leave.
I'm sorry that I have inconvenienced you.

First of all, I would like to understand the situation. Could you send me photographs?
Was the packaging material damaged when the items arrived?
I think a refund of 60 dollars is doable just as you proposed.
Looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I am still processing the contract with the bank but the bank is closed today and tomorrow so the processing can't proceed. The total volume of the product I will order from you is 1000 CTNS but I am still calculating the breakdown of each of their sizes. I am also talking with inspection agencies about raising the product quality so please wait a little longer.

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I am taking procedures of a contract and bank, however the bank is closed today and tomorrow, so I cannot make progress with the procedures. The total volume of the product I will order you is 1000 CTNS, however I am still calculating the breakdown number of the sizes. I am also talking with inspection agencies to improve the product quality, so please wait a little longer.