Hiroya Miura (juemon1) — もらったレビュー

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Five selected dishes cooked uniquely by Japanese mothers. Introducing the five quintessential Japanese family dishes. Meat, potatoes, onions, and konnyaku noodles (konnyaku is a type of jelly made from yam) are stir-fried in oil, seasoned and simmered with soy sauce, sugar, and mirin. Beef, pork, or chicken can be used for the meat. As the ingredients are same in the Japanese curry, they can be easily supplied, and the dish was introduced nation-wide as a meal in the navy. It's the first dish that comes to many people's mind as their mother's cooking. The flavors vary from family to family, providing conversation topics amongst friends, discussing the lightness or heaviness of the flavor, or whether to use shichimi peppers (seven-flavor chili pepper mixture), etc.

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Five selected dishes cooked uniquely by Japanese mothers. Introducing the five quintessential Japanese family dishes. Meat, potatoes, onions, and konnyaku noodles (konnyaku is a type of jelly made from yam) are stir-fried in oil, seasoned and simmered with soy sauce, sugar, and mirin. Beef, pork, or chicken can be used for the meat. As the ingredients are same as the Japanese curry, they can be easily stocked, and the dish was introduced nation-wide as a meal in the navy. It's the first dish that comes to many people's mind as their mother's cooking. The flavors vary from family to family, providing conversation topics amongst friends, discussing the lightness or heaviness of the flavor, or whether to use shichimi peppers (seven-flavor chili pepper mixture), etc.

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According to the Policy B, would the seller have to be responsible for all the tariff incurred towards the buyer?
As my German is not good and I cannot comprehend the policy on your homepage. Would you please advise me if the tariff can be negotiated between the buyer and the seller? Could you please explain what Policy B means?

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According to the Policy B, would the seller have to be responsible for all the tariff incurred towards the buyer?
As I am not good at German so I cannot comprehend the policy on your homepage. Would you please advise me if the tariff can be negotiated between the buyer and the seller? What are written in the Policy B?

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The waterfalls are slowly emerging!

What beautiful waterfalls! It's definitely worth the forty-minute walk.
Mino-o Falls are the only waterfalls in Osaka which made the list of the "100 best Japanese Waterfalls".

Mino-o Falls are the only waterfall in Osaka prefecture chosen as one of the "100 best Japanese Waterfalls". Mino-o Falls were even visited by the famous samurai-lord, Nobunaga Oda, during the Sengoku period.

During the summertime, the falls are illuminated sometimes for the local festivities (the illumination does not take place during autumn foliage).

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The waterfalls are slowly emerging!

What beautiful waterfalls! It's definitely worth the forty-minute walk.
Mino-o Falls are the only waterfalls in Osaka that were in the list of the "100 best Japanese Waterfalls".

Mino-o great Falls are the only waterfall in Osaka prefecture chosen as one of the "100 best Japanese Waterfalls". It is believed that Mino-o Falls were even visited by the famous samurai-lord, Nobunaga Oda, during the Sengoku period.

During the summertime, the falls are illuminated sometimes for the local festivities (the illumination does not take place during autumn foliage).

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It's everybody's must-have item for the wintertime in Japan. [Uniqlo's Heattech]

Let us introduce you to the must-have winter item known to almost all Japanese, starting with the warm innerwear worn by most Japanese.

Uniqlo's heattech became the Japanese winter standard since 2003.

Today Japan's Uniqlo has made its name internationally. Uniqlo's heattech line of products, first intriduced in 2003, has become a standard for surviving the winter in Japan.

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It's everybody's must-have item for the wintertime in Japan. [Uniqlo's Heattech]

Let us introduce you to the must-have winter item known to almost all Japanese, starting with the warm innerwear worn by most Japanese.

Uniqlo's heattech became the Japanese winter standard since 2003.

Today Japan's Uniqlo has made its name internationally. Uniqlo's heattech line of products, first introduced in 2003, has become a standard for surviving the winter in Japan.

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1. Tokyo by the day
Close up of Tokyo Tower (day time)

2. Tokyo by the night
Close-up of Tokyo Tower (night time)

You could see two completely different sides of Tokyo!

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1. Tokyo by the day
[Close up of Tokyo Tower (day time)]

2. Tokyo by the night
[Close-up of Tokyo Tower (night time)]

You could see two completely different sides of Tokyo!