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元の翻訳
<Dancers were great>
I am glad that I watched SA.CHOOM on my third visit to Korea, after having watched Nanta and Jump.
The moment at the end where everyone in the venue danced together was very enjoyable as the dance was simple but created a sense of unity.
However, we had a difficult time finding the venue; we finally reached after asking the way from passers-by repeatedly. Hence, we recommend that you check in advance. It is crucial that you check the exit from the station which you should take.

<Folk show>
Although we were looking forward to the show, it turned out to be so-so. I had a good impression of the atmostphere at the beginning. I do not think I would be participating again.

修正後
<Dancers were great>
I am glad that I watched SA.CHOOM on my third visit to Korea, after having watched Nanta and Jump.
The moment at the end where everyone in the venue danced together was very enjoyable as the dance was simple but created a sense of unity.
However, we had a difficult time finding the venue; we finally reached after asking the way from passers-by repeatedly. Hence, we recommend that you check in advance. It is crucial that you check the exit from the station which you should take.

<Folk show>
Although we were looking forward to the show, it turned out to be so-so. I had a good impression of the atmostphere at the beginning. I do not think I would go to the show again.

元の翻訳
Although I have watched various shows in Korea, as expected SaChoom is the best!
I became acquainted with the employee at the registration counter, and bought the Frequent Visitor pass which is offered to people who have visited for more than ten times.
After collecting stamps, I will be able to get free tickets.
If you ask me why I watch the shows so often, I would say that it is very refreshing how there are subtle differences each time I watch a show.
Also, the newcomers are really good! They were excellent in portraying the emotions of people who have gone to and returned from the army. I think it's ad-lib, but the exchange was superb. I was able to watch in peace.
Furthermore, even though it was the same content, the show was so interesting that I laughed all the same. Just as I said, it's enjoyable no matter how many times I watch it.

修正後
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Although I have watched various shows in Korea, as expected SaChoom is the best!
I became acquainted with the employee at the registration counter, and bought [mistranslation: see the following sentence] the Frequent Visitor pass which is offered to people who have visited more than ten times.
After collecting stamps, I will be able to get free tickets.
If you ask me why I watch the shows so often, I would say that it is very refreshing how there are subtle differences each time I watch a show.
Also, the newcomers are really good! They were excellent in portraying the emotions of people who have gone to and returned from the army [mistranslation: he means that they are understudies, not regular performers. It's a reference to South Korea's mandatory military service]. I think it's ad-lib, but the exchange was superb. I was able to watch in peace.
Furthermore, even though it was the same content, the show was so interesting that I laughed all the same. Just as I said, it's enjoyable no matter how many times I watch it.

元の翻訳
<Third time>
It was my third time watching this show. One commendable point was that it was near to the hotel I was staying at.
After arriving in Seoul, on the way to the hotel, I informed the guide that I had made reservations to the this show. I was told that it was on the way. The guide told me that if it was my first time watching, he recommended "Nanta" and "Jump".
My seat was grade S-R, but right in the middle of the 4th column.

<It was enjoyable>
I watched it with a friend who was visiting Seoul for the first time.
We were impressed by the intensity of the dance.
We were also impressed by both the standard of the performers as well as their singing ability.

修正後
<Third time>
It was my third time watching this show. One commendable point was that it was near to the hotel I was staying at.
After arriving in Seoul, on the way to the hotel, I informed the guide that I had made reservations to the this show. I was told that you know all there is to know about. The guide told me that if it was my first time watching, he recommended "Nanta" and "Jump".
My seat was grade S-R, but right in the middle of the 4th column.

<It was enjoyable>
I watched it with a friend who was visiting Seoul for the first time.
We were impressed by the intensity of the dance.
We were also impressed by both the standard of the performers as well as their singing ability.