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“SAKURA” series in 2013 (goods ver.)
From a tumbler, to a canteen and a bag to bring to Hanami (*refer below), any goods have a full of cherry flowers pattern.
Hanami is Japanese unique custom that people observe cherry blossoms to enjoy the herald of spring season.

It is something like a picnic to see beautiful cherries. People gather to enjoy watching cherry blossoms with lunchbox and alcohol.

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“SAKURA” series in 2013 (goods ver.)
From a tumbler, to a canteen and a bag to bring to Hanami (*refer below), all the goods have a full cherry flowers pattern.
Hanami is a Japanese unique custom that people observe cherry blossoms to enjoy the herald of spring season.

It is something like a picnic to see beautiful cherries. People gather to enjoy watching cherry blossoms bringing lunchboxes and alcohols.

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*Be sure to wash the rice many times in order to make them glutinous, if you use foreign rice; no matter which rice you use.

It is very simple to make.

1. All combine
Pour raw egg and soy sauce into the rice…

2. Stir with chopsticks!
In fact, foreigners try rice poured raw eggs more than Japanese. You can make it that simply.
That’s it.
Now you can eat. Let's have the dish while it is hot.

That’s amazingly delicious… isn’t it?
The eggs obtained in Japan are fresh so that you can eat them raw.

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*Be sure to wash the rice many times in order to make them glutinous, if you use foreign rice（外国米は一般的にLong grain riceではないかと思います。Foreign riceと言ってしまうと、ちょっと不自然かもしれません）; no matter which type of rice you use.

It is very simple to make.

1. Combine them all
Pour raw egg and soy sauce into the rice…

2. Stir with chopsticks!
In fact, foreigners try rice poured raw eggs more than Japanese. You can make it that simply.
That’s it.
Now you can eat. Let's have the dish while it is hot.

That’s amazingly delicious… isn’t it?
You can enjoy them raw, as normally eggs on the market are fresh in Japan.

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When visiting Japan, the most recommendable place to check! Special localized Hello Kitty! ～Osaka ver～

Now that Hello Kitty has gained world-wide big fame. In Japan there are localized Hello Kitties in many areas. Many Japanese people buy and collect the special localized Kitty in their destination. When you collect such Kitties, you will learn the local culture and special products, as well as you will get a special memory.
The first is Osaka version!

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When visiting Japan, the most recommendable place to check! Special localized Hello Kitty! ～Osaka ver.～

Now that Hello Kitty has gained world-wide big fame. In Japan there are localized Hello Kitties in many areas. Many Japanese people buy and collect the special localized Kitty in their destination. When you collect such Kitties, you will learn the local culture and special products, as well as you will get a special memory.
The first is Osaka version!

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I would like to watch the pro-baseball game, Hanshin Tigers (the professional baseball team in Osaka)!

Osaka’s popular baseball team
It is well known that many Osaka people are the crazy fun of this baseball team.

Fervent Funs
Car decorated with tiger stripe?
I also found a motorcycle.
Even Kitty there is a fun of the Tigers!
This Kitty has a takoyaki octopus dumpling, instead of a bat.
What an amazing Osaka soul!

Osaka Kitty seems to love tigers and takoyaki dumplings.
Next time, I would like to introduce a special localized Kitty in Kyoto.

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I would like to watch the pro-baseball game, Hanshin Tigers (the professional baseball team in Osaka)!

Osaka’s popular baseball team
It is well known that many Osaka people are the crazy fun of this baseball team.

Fervent Funs
Car decorated with tiger stripe?
I also found a motorcycle.
Even Kitty becomes the Tigers' fun!
This Kitty has a takoyaki octopus dumpling, instead of a bat.
What an amazing Osaka soul!

Osaka Kitty seems to love tigers and takoyaki dumplings.
Next time, I would like to introduce a special localized Kitty in Kyoto.