Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

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We apologize to have given you much work.
We will refund you 35.95 dollars for returning the item from Paypal today in advance.
As for the amount that you paid, we will issue a refund immediately after we receive back the item.
We appreciate your cooperation.

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We apologize to have caused you trouble.
We will refund you USD 35.95 for returning the item through Paypal today in advance.
As for the amount that you paid for the item, we will issue a refund immediately after we receive back the item.
We appreciate your cooperation.

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We are sorry to cause you trouble. We will refund you shipping fee 35.95 US dollars in advance through PayPal today.
As for the amount you paid, we will issue a refund as soon as the item arrives.
Thank you for your understanding.

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We are sorry to cause you trouble. We will refund you the shipping fee of USD 35.95 in advance through PayPal today.
As for the amount you paid for the item, we will issue a refund as soon as the item arrives.
Thank you for your understanding.

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ZIP-FM「PEACHY.」

3/27(Thurs)9:00～11:00↵
Apperance of 「KUMI KODA」 in ZIP-FM「PEACHY.」!

■Program official site
http://zip-fm.co.jp/program/peachy/

※Please take note that the broadcasting contents might change due to circumstances.

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ZIP-FM「PEACHY.」

March 27(Friday) 9:00～11:00↵
「KUMI KODA」 will appear in ZIP-FM「PEACHY.」!

■Program official site
http://zip-fm.co.jp/program/peachy/

※Please take note that the broadcasting contents might change due to certain circumstances.

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ZIP-FM "PEACHY"

March 27th (Friday) 9:00 to 11:00
KUMI KODA is going to perform in the ZIP-FM "PEACHY".

Official website of the program
http://zip-fm.co.jp/program/peachy/

*The program is subject to change due to some reason. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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ZIP-FM "PEACHY"

March 27th (Friday) 9:00 to 11:00
KUMI KODA is going to perform in the ZIP-FM "PEACHY".

Official website of the program
http://zip-fm.co.jp/program/peachy/

*The program is subject to change due to certain reasons. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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Do you have any plan to exhibit abc from now on?

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Do you have any plan to exhibit abc again in the future?

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Do you have any plan to list abc again in the future?

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Do you have any plan to put up abc for sale again in the future?

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Do you have a plan to exhibit and sale the abc in the future?

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Do you have any plan to exhibit and sell the abc in the future?

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billboard JAPAN

Appearance of 「KUMI KODA」's Special interview in billboard JAPAN!
http://www.billboard-japan.com/special/detail/1212

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billboard JAPAN

A special interview with KUMI KODA is on billboard JAPAN!
http://www.billboard-japan.com/special/detail/1212

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billboard JAPAN

A special interview of KUMI KODA is listed in billboard JAPAN
http://www.billboard-japan.com/special/detail/1212

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billboard JAPAN

A special interview with KUMI KODA is on the billboard JAPAN website!
http://www.billboard-japan.com/special/detail/1212

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inserting special interview featuring Koda Kumi in Oricon Style!

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ORICON STYLE↵
↵
A special interview featuring Koda Kumi on Oricon Style! ↵
http://www.oricon.co.jp/special/47770/

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ORICON STYLE

In ORICON STYLE, a special interview of KUMI KODA is listed.
http://www.oricon.co.jp/special/47770/

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ORICON STYLE

On ORICON STYLE, a special interview with KUMI KODA is published.
http://www.oricon.co.jp/special/47770/

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https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/id968283289

[CD] RZCD-59747 ¥ 3,000 (tax out)
[CD + DVD] RZCD-59745 / B ¥ 3,900 (tax out)
[CD + Blu-Ray] RZCD-59746 / B ¥ 4,600 (tax out)
FC Limited Edition [CD + DVD] RZC1-59748 / B ¥ 4,980 (tax out)

★ CD
[First run specifications] Gorgeous special package specification
[Contents] all 16 songs

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https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/id968283289

[CD] RZCD-59747 ¥ 3,000 (tax out)
[CD + DVD] RZCD-59745 / B ¥ 3,900 (tax out)
[CD + Blu-Ray] RZCD-59746 / B ¥ 4,600 (tax out)
FC Limited Edition [CD + DVD] RZC1-59748 / B ¥ 4,980 (tax out)

★ CD
[First run specifications] Gorgeous special package specification
[Contents] All 16 songs

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■Pre-order from Amazon
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/4800239966
■Pre-order frin mu-mo shop
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/150313kuu6/


■Pre-order from Rakuten books

http://books.rakuten.co.jp/rb/13162174


■Pre-order from 7nets shopping

http://www.7netshopping.jp/books/detail/-/accd/1106513854/subno/1

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■Pre-order from Amazon
https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/4800239966
■Pre-order from mu-mo shop
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/150313kuu6/


■Pre-order from Rakuten books

http://books.rakuten.co.jp/rb/13162174


■Pre-order from 7nets shopping

http://www.7netshopping.jp/books/detail/-/accd/1106513854/subno/1

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The spring is the season of cherry blossom in Japan. Let's download this app. JapanShoppjng!

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Spring is the season of cherry blossom in Japan. Let's download this app. JapanShoppjng!

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Japanese spring comes with cherry blossoms. Let's get it started by downloading this app. JapanShopping!

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Spring in Japan comes with cherry blossoms. Let's get started by downloading this app. JapanShopping!

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GOOD ROCKS! March 18 released issue carries the interview!

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GOOD ROCKS! March 18 release issue carries the interview!