akagreen (akariaka) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Dear XXX Customer Service XXX

Thank you for your help every time.
It's XXX.

Please check copies of my ID and credit card attached on this mail, which you required me before.
Another attached file includes the password of my credit card.
My ID is my drivers licence.

Could you inform me, if you found another problems=
Thank you very much.

修正後
Dear XXX Customer Service XXX

Thank you for your help every time.
It's XXX.

Please check copies of my ID and credit card attached on this mail, which you required me before.
Another attached file includes the password of my credit card.
My ID is my drivers licence.

Please let me know if there is any problem with the documents.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I have started my presentation to japanese companies
So, I'd like to know certainely what goods qare available to buy from you.
Than you very much to reply as soon as possible because I want to discuss with you.
Is it possible to put a photograph of the price list that I receved first in order to ensure the goods?
Please tell me the color in each product available to buy.
Please tell me the trade name, photo, prices if there is a commodity available to buy that was not in the price list.
For example ** ,** and so on.
I am ready to monopize.I
will send you a list of books to order this week.
Best regards,

修正後
I have started my presentation to Japanese companies
and, I'd like to make sure that I know exactly what goods are available to buy from you.
I will appreciate your fact response because I want to discuss the matter with you.
Is it possible to attach a photograph of the goods to the price list that I received first in order to ensure the goods?
Please tell me the colors of each product available to buy.
Please tell me the product names, photos, prices if there is any goods available to buy that was not in the price list.
For example ** ,** and so on.
I am ready to take over the market .I
will send you a list of books to order this week.
Best regards,

元の翻訳
clip pipe: method to maintain a window image
This proposal presents an application where you can cut a specific window and paste on other application. With only selecting the desired part of the window the user is easily going to be able to coordinate both applications.
In this suggested procedure the same cut image will be moved in real time.
Due to the coordination previous preparations are reduced and the operation of the origin is reflected immediately, eliminating unnecessary work enabling the user to focus on his tasks.

修正後
clip pipe: method to maintain a window image
This proposal presents an application where you can cut a specific window and paste on other application. With only selecting the desired part of the window the user is easily going to be able to coordinate both applications.
In this suggested procedure the same cut image will be moved in real time.
Due to the coordination, previous preparations are reduced and the operation of the origin is reflected immediately, eliminating unnecessary work enabling the user to focus on his tasks.