翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2015/02/19 23:39:02

albizzia
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日本語

学校に行くのですか?
それはとても良い事ですね!
どんな事を勉強するのかな?
新しい事を始めるのはとてもワクワクしますね。
私も春になったら新しい事をやってみたいなぁ?

もうすぐ春です。日本人は春になると温かくなり身体が軽くなるのか?新しい事を初める事が多いです。
フィンランドではどうですか?
フィンランドは今とっても寒いと思います。
身体に気をつけて下さいね。

英語

Are you going to go to school?
It is very good thing!
What kind of study do you do there?
It's hopeful to start new things,isn't it?
I also want to do new things in spring if I can!?

Soon it is spring in Japan.We Japanese,many of them begin new thing in spring because our body feel lighter with warm temperature,I think.
How about in Finland?
It seems very cold now in Finland.
Please take care of your health.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/02/21 10:52:21

元の翻訳
Are you going to go to school?
It is very good thing!
What kind of study do you do there?
It's hopeful to start new things,isn't it?
I also want to do new things in spring if I can!?

Soon it is spring in Japan.We Japanese,many of them begin new thing in spring because our body feel lighter with warm temperature,I think.
How about in Finland?
It seems very cold now in Finland.
Please take care of your health.

修正後
Are you going to school?
It's a very good thing!
What are you going to study?
It's exciting to start new things, isn't it?
I also want to do new things in spring.

Soon it is spring in Japan. Many of us Japanese begin new things in spring because our body feels lighter with a warm temperature, I think.
How about in Finland?
It must be very cold now in Finland.
Please take care of yourself.

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