翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 41 / 1 Review / 2015/02/19 23:26:24

frederic
frederic 41 i like to translate something. like a...
日本語

学校に行くのですか?
それはとても良い事ですね!
どんな事を勉強するのかな?
新しい事を始めるのはとてもワクワクしますね。
私も春になったら新しい事をやってみたいなぁ?

もうすぐ春です。日本人は春になると温かくなり身体が軽くなるのか?新しい事を初める事が多いです。
フィンランドではどうですか?
フィンランドは今とっても寒いと思います。
身体に気をつけて下さいね。

英語

Do you go to school?
I think it is good for you.
Now, what are you leaning?
I think it is exciting when you are learning new skill.
I also want to try other thing after winter.

Spring is coming. Does Japanese feel the body becomes light when it is Spring? A lot things are starting.
How is weather in Finland?
I think Finland also is cold for now.
Take care yourself please.

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yakuok 60 ・日英・英日翻訳・通訳。 ・海外の国際校で教育を受け、イギリス英語・アメ...
yakuokはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/24 01:42:51

元の翻訳
Do you go to school?
I think it is good for you.
Now, what are you leaning?
I think it is exciting when you are learning new skill.
I also want to try other thing after winter.

Spring is coming. Does Japanese feel the body becomes light when it is Spring? A lot things are starting.
How is weather in Finland?
I think Finland also is cold for now.
Take care yourself please.

修正後
Do you go to school?
I think it is good for you.
What are you going to study?
I think it is exciting when you are learning new skills.
I also want to do new things after winter.

Spring is coming. Maybe because Japanese people feel light when Spring comes, so they start new things.
How is the weather in Finland?
I think Finland is also cold for now.
Please take care of yourself.

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