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評価: 52 / ネイティブ フランス語 / 1 Review / 2015/02/05 02:19:40

riku87
riku87 52 フランス出身でスウェーデン在住のリクと申します。 日本語・英語・中国語（...
日本語

日本人は細かい事にうるさいですが、これをクリアできれば、全世界に通用する
逸品になりますのでお願いします。

今回の箱の写真と新しい箱のイメージの写真添付しました
写真では分りずらいですが箱に、のり、細かな線キズが有る為に四隅が白っぽくなっています
新しい箱のイメージは両方とも紙箱です。小さい方はカーボン調の箱ですのでKKに
ピッタリだと思います　さらに中は黒のベルベット調の生地が貼り付けてあります

それと今、通常商品の発注をするといつ届きますか。

英語

Japanese are peculiar about details but if you can clear those requests then it will become a good product that can sell in the whole world.

I have attached pictures of the current box and the design for the new box.
It is hard to see on the picture but on there is glue and scratches on the box and that's why the 4 corners are a bit white.
The new box designs are both paper boxes. The small one has a carbon style so I think it is perfect for KK. Besides, for the inside, paper looking like black velvet is pasted.
If I order the regular product now, when will I receive it?

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667 52 Conyacでの翻訳経歴（2014年10月登録）： Standard依頼...
yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/06 09:28:47

元の翻訳
Japanese are peculiar about details but if you can clear those requests then it will become a good product that can sell in the whole world.

I have attached pictures of the current box and the design for the new box.
It is hard to see on the picture but on there is glue and scratches on the box and that's why the 4 corners are a bit white.
The new box designs are both paper boxes. The small one has a carbon style so I think it is perfect for KK. Besides, for the inside, paper looking like black velvet is pasted.
If I order the regular product now, when will I receive it?

修正後
Japanese are peculiar about details but if you can clear those requests then it will become a good product that can sell in the whole world.

I have attached pictures of the current box and the design for the new box.
It is hard to see on the picture but there is glue and scratches on the box and that's why the 4 corners are a bit white.
The new box designs are both paper boxes. The small one has a carbon style so I think it is perfect for KK. Besides, for the inside, paper looking like black velvet is pasted.
If I order the regular product now, when will I receive it?

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