翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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日本語

こんにちは、私は〇〇は２こ注文して、今日一つ届いた。
もう一つは発送してくれてますか？
追跡番号を教えてほしい。

もし発送していなければ急いで送ってもらえますか？
私に連絡を下さい。

よろしくお願いします

英語

Hello,I ordered two of 〇〇,and one of them arrived.
Could you send me the other one?
Please tell me the tracking number.

If you haven't send it yet,could you hurry up?
Please contact me.

Thank you.

レビュー ( 1 )

mayustardustはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/10 21:40:20

元の翻訳
Hello,I ordered two of 〇〇,and one of them arrived.
Could you send me the other one?
Please tell me the tracking number.

If you haven't send it yet,could you hurry up?
Please contact me.

Thank you.

修正後
Hello,I ordered two of 〇〇,and one of them arrived today.
Have you sent the other one?
Please tell me the tracking number.

If you haven't send it yet,could you hurry up?
Please contact me.

Thank you.