翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 2 Reviews / 2014/12/02 11:33:19
沖縄初めてで１人参加の今回のツアーでした。ガイドさんの説明が楽しく面白くて全く退屈することなく１日楽しませてもらえました。
沖縄ワールドでの「エイサー」の音楽に魅了され沖縄ファンになってしまいました。
楽しいツアーでした。
I participated in this tour alone during my first travel to Okinawa. As the tour guide was very good speaker and his/her guidance was interesting, I could enjoy myself all day long. Also, I was fascinated by the music of "Eisaa" at Okinawa World, and I totally became a fun of Okinawa. It was a really fun tour.
レビュー ( 2 )
元の翻訳
I participated in this tour alone during my first travel to Okinawa. As the tour guide was very good speaker and his/her guidance was interesting, I could enjoy myself all day long. Also, I was fascinated by the music of "Eisaa" at Okinawa World, and I totally became a fun of Okinawa. It was a really fun tour.
修正後
I participated in this tour alone during my first travel to Okinawa. As the tour guide was a very good speaker and his/her guidance was interesting, I could enjoy myself all day long. Also, I was fascinated by the music of "Eisaa" at Okinawa World, and I totally became a fun of Okinawa. It was a really fun tour.
元の翻訳
I participated in this tour alone during my first travel to Okinawa. As the tour guide was very good speaker and his/her guidance was interesting, I could enjoy myself all day long. Also, I was fascinated by the music of "Eisaa" at Okinawa World, and I totally became a fun of Okinawa. It was a really fun tour.
修正後
I participated in this tour alone during my first trip to Okinawa [great]. As the tour guide was a very good speaker and his/her guidance was interesting, I enjoyed myself all day long [good]. Also, I was fascinated by the music of "Eisaa" at Okinawa World, and I totally became a fun [spelling] of Okinawa. It was a really fun tour.
A great translation, slightly marred by minor errors.
moonstar_rocket様 レビューおよび添削いただき、ありがとうございました。まだまだ勉強中の身で大変恐縮ではございますが、レビューを星1つと判断されました理由をお聞かせ願えませんでしょうか。
すみません！！！！とてもいい訳をされていたので☆4つつけました。送信するとき確認したのですが・・本当にごめんなさい。申し訳ないです。
私のミスです。すみませんでした。