翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

東京は16時を過ぎたころで、秋晴れの天気ですよ。洗濯物もよく乾きそうです。

あなたのメールに書かれている〜という表現は、ほとんどの日本人に伝わりますが、〜の方がいいと思います。

〜について、詳細な説明ありがとうございます。挙げていただいた例もすごくわかりやすかったです。あなたは教え方が上手な先生だと思います。

また英語の勉強をしているときにわからない表現があったとき、質問させてください。もちろん、日本関連であれば私も答えられるので、なにかあれば遠慮なく聞いてください。

英語

It is just after 4 o'clock in Tokyo, and it is a nice day in the fall. The clothes I washed are dried well.

Almost all the Japanese people understand the expression ～that you wrote in the email, but the expression ～ is better.

As for ～, thank you for yoru detailed explanation. The example that you specified is also very easy to understand. You must be a teacher who are good at teacher.

If I do not understand some expressions while I am learning English, may I ask you a question? If the items are in regard with Japan, I can answer them. If you have a question, please do not hesitate to ask.

レビュー ( 1 )

iladはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/27 17:19:31

元の翻訳
It is just after 4 o'clock in Tokyo, and it is a nice day in the fall. The clothes I washed are dried well.

Almost all the Japanese people understand the expression ～that you wrote in the email, but the expression ～ is better.

As for ～, thank you for yoru detailed explanation. The example that you specified is also very easy to understand. You must be a teacher who are good at teacher.

If I do not understand some expressions while I am learning English, may I ask you a question? If the items are in regard with Japan, I can answer them. If you have a question, please do not hesitate to ask.

修正後
It is just after 4 pm in Tokyo, and it is a nice day in the fall. The clothes I washed are dried well.

Almost all the Japanese people understand the expression ～that you wrote in the email, but the expression ～ is better.

As for ～, thank you for your detailed explanation. The example that you specified is also very easy to understand. You must be a teacher who are good at teacher.

If I do not understand some expressions while I am learning English, may I ask you a question? If the items are in regard with Japan, I can answer them. If you have a question, please do not hesitate to ask.

原文で16：00となっていますので、４ｐｍが適切かもしれません。