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英語

東海道新幹線（東京―新大阪）が来春、２３年ぶりに最高速度を２８５キロにアップする。カーブが多い路線のため、１９９２年の「のぞみ」登場以来、２７０キロで頭打ちだった。来月１日で開業５０年。記録更新は、「うまく曲がり、早く止まる技術」を追求し続けた成果だ。

日本語

The Tokaido Shinkansen bullet train (Tokyo - Shin-Osaka) will gain the highest speed at 285 km/h for 23 years next spring. Because of the many curves on the track, the highest speed has remained 270 km/h since the train "Nozomi" appeared in 1992.
It will be the 50 year anniversary as of 1st of next month. Breaking this record is a tribute to the pursuit of "the technology of turning smoothly and stop rapidly."

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nyincaliはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/26 14:31:04

元の翻訳
The Tokaido Shinkansen bullet train (Tokyo - Shin-Osaka) will gain the highest speed at 285 km/h for 23 years next spring. Because of the many curves on the track, the highest speed has remained 270 km/h since the train "Nozomi" appeared in 1992.
It will be the 50 year anniversary as of 1st of next month. Breaking this record is a tribute to the pursuit of "the technology of turning smoothly and stop rapidly."

修正後
The Tokaido Shinkansen bullet train (Tokyo - Shin-Osaka) will reach the highest speed of 285 km/h after an interval of 23 years in next spring. Because of the many curves on the track, the highest speed has remained 270 km/h since the train "Nozomi" appeared in 1992.
It will be the 50 year anniversary as of 1st of next month. Breaking this record is a tribute to the pursuit of "the technology of turning smoothly and stop rapidly."