翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/07/26 15:51:38

miyukinkym
miyukinkym 52 I have worked as an E to J translator...
日本語

こどもたちは、爬虫類を含め生き物が大好きです。
今日は広島にアマゾン展が来たのでいってみたよ。
りさにメールを先日送ったよ~見てみてね

英語

The children are very fond of animals including reptiles.
Today, I went to the exhibition featuring the Amazon.
The other day, I sent a mail to Risa. Please check it.

レビュー ( 1 )

acdcasic 60 こんにちは、遠藤です。日⇔英訳対応が可能なバイリンガルで、翻訳歴は5年です...
acdcasicはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/29 01:10:32

元の翻訳
The children are very fond of animals including reptiles.
Today, I went to the exhibition featuring the Amazon.
The other day, I sent a mail to Risa. Please check it.

修正後
My kids are very fond of animals including reptiles.
Today, I went to an exhibition featuring the Amazon in Hiroshima.
The other day, I sent a mail to Risa. Please check it.

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