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日本語

カナダの建国記念日に当たる７月1日に、トロント観光局が東京都港区のアカデミーヒルズでレセプションを開催。特別協力のMPIジャパンチャプターの会員をはじめ、企業のミーティングプランナー、旅行会社などから多数のMICE関係者が参加した。

現在トロントが注目されている理由として、羽田からも直行便が就航すること、「赤毛のアン」の舞台であるプリンスエドワード島に近いこと、安全・安心・フレンドリーな都会であること、2017年に建国150周年の記念イベントが企画されていることなどがある。

英語

On July 1st which is canadian national foundation day, There was a reception at the academy hills in Minato Tokyo held by Toronto's tourist office.
Lead by the members of Japan panchapters, meeting planners, and travel agencies, many people rerated with MICE participated.

The reason why Toronto is famous, flying to Toronto from Haneda directoly, close to prince edward island where " Anne of Green Gables" is filmed, and safe, friendly urban. There are various events to celebrate for national foundation 55th on 2017.

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tensei3013はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/03 03:29:12

元の翻訳
On July 1st which is canadian national foundation day, There was a reception at the academy hills in Minato Tokyo held by Toronto's tourist office.
Lead by the members of Japan panchapters, meeting planners, and travel agencies, many people rerated with MICE participated.

The reason why Toronto is famous, flying to Toronto from Haneda directoly, close to prince edward island where " Anne of Green Gables" is filmed, and safe, friendly urban. There are various events to celebrate for national foundation 55th on 2017.

修正後
On July 1st which is Canadian National Foundation day, There was a reception at the academy hills in Minato Tokyo held by Toronto's tourist office.
Lead by the members of MPI Japan chapters based on special partnership , meeting planners, and travel agencies, many people related to MICE participated.

As the reason why Toronto is attractive, flying to Toronto from Haneda directly, close to prince edward island where " Anne of Green Gables" is filmed, and safe, friendly urban. Also there are plan to hold 150th anniversary of events to celebrate for national foundation in 2017.

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