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評価: 60 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/06/24 04:10:51

acdcasic
acdcasic 60 こんにちは、遠藤です。日⇔英訳対応が可能なバイリンガルで、翻訳歴は5年です...
日本語

こんにちは
私は"DayTrader v1.5.2"EA購入者の●●です。
"Special2.4"のEAを送ってくれて有難うございます。
ただし以前私が依頼したのは"DayTrader v1.5.2"EAのcoding requestですが
そちらの進捗状況はどうなってますか?
再度coding requestファイルを添付したので宜しくお願いします。

英語

Hello,

This is ●●, who purchased the "DayTrader v1.5.2" EA. Thank you very much for sending me the EA of "Special 2.4". However, what I requested before is the coding request of "DayTrader v1.5.2" EA. Can you please let me know the progress on that?
Attached you can find the coding request file (resent). Thank you in advance for your cooperation.

Best Regards,

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ryojiyono 52 英検1級。 TOEFL623。 TOEIC 975。
ryojiyonoはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/24 11:45:05

元の翻訳
Hello,

This is ●●, who purchased the "DayTrader v1.5.2" EA. Thank you very much for sending me the EA of "Special 2.4". However, what I requested before is the coding request of "DayTrader v1.5.2" EA. Can you please let me know the progress on that?
Attached you can find the coding request file (resent). Thank you in advance for your cooperation.

Best Regards,

修正後
Hello,

This is ●●, who purchased the "DayTrader v1.5.2" EA. Thank you very much for sending me the EA of "Special 2.4". What I have requested before, however, is the coding request of "DayTrader v1.5.2" EA. Can you please let me know the progress on that?
Attached you can find the coding request file (resent). Thank you in advance for your cooperation.

Best Regards,

とてもきれいです。Howeverは文頭にない方がいいと思い少し修正させていただきました。

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