翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 53 / 1 Review / 2014/06/19 13:56:49

日本語

<イベント対象商品>
6/18(水)発売ミニアルバム「Together」Loppi・HMV限定盤(AVC1-39164)、CD+DVD(AVCD-39163/B)

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英語

[Available Products]
A short album "Together" which is going to be released on June 18th (Wednesday) exclusively at Loppi and HMV (AVC1-39164), CD+DVD (AVCD-39163/B)

*1 You can't participate the event if you don't have both an event ticket and a "ticket for handshaking sessions" included to the firer-print CDs. We'll collect the tickets during the sessions.
*2 We'll ask you to line up at the time doors open.
*3 The sessions will be over as all people lined up finish shaking hands.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ] 66 I've translated as a hobby for many y...
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/20 03:32:40

元の翻訳
[Available Products]
A short album "Together" which is going to be released on June 18th (Wednesday) exclusively at Loppi and HMV (AVC1-39164), CD+DVD (AVCD-39163/B)

*1 You can't participate the event if you don't have both an event ticket and a "ticket for handshaking sessions" included to the firer-print CDs. We'll collect the tickets during the sessions.
*2 We'll ask you to line up at the time doors open.
*3 The sessions will be over as all people lined up finish shaking hands.

修正後
[Qualifying Products]
Mini album "Together" available June 18th (Wednesday) exclusively at Loppi and HMV (AVC1-39164), CD+DVD (AVCD-39163/B)

*You can't participate in the event if you don't have both an event ticket and a ticket for the handshaking sessions included in the first-run CDs. We'll collect the tickets during the sessions.
*We'll ask you to line up at the time doors open.
*The sessions will be over when all people lined up finish shaking hands.

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