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評価: 62 / 1 Review / 2014/05/30 15:21:53

hana_the_cat_2014
日本語

"女子流が米国初上陸！サンフランシスコで行われる米国最大級のJ-POPカルチャーフェスティバル、J-POP SUMMIT FESTIVALに名誉ゲストとして参加！女子流は、ステージパフォーマンスを行うのに加え、2本の主演映画（『学校の怪談…』『5つ数えれば…』）が、同フェス内にて開催されるJapan Film Festival of San Franciscoで上映されることになり、舞台挨拶等も実施、まさに同フェスを女子流一色に染める！

英語

TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be visiting the States for the first time! They will be at J-POP SUMMIT FESTIVAL, one of the biggest J-Pop culture festival in the U.S., which will be held in San Francisco. They are invited as a honored guest! TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be at the stage as a performer. On the top of that, their two featured movies ("Thriller at school" and "If you count five.." ) will also be shown at the Japan Festival San Francisco during the J-POP SUMMIT. They will be greeting at the theater, too. All of them means that the festival will be hijacked by TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE!

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lebron_2014 52 I am a part time translator during ni...
lebron_2014はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/31 11:16:28

元の翻訳
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be visiting the States for the first time! They will be at J-POP SUMMIT FESTIVAL, one of the biggest J-Pop culture festival in the U.S., which will be held in San Francisco. They are invited as a honored guest! TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be at the stage as a performer. On the top of that, their two featured movies ("Thriller at school" and "If you count five.." ) will also be shown at the Japan Festival San Francisco during the J-POP SUMMIT. They will be greeting at the theater, too. All of them means that the festival will be hijacked by TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE!

修正後
TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be visiting the States for the first time! They will be at J-POP SUMMIT FESTIVAL, one of the biggest J-Pop culture festival in the U.S., which will be held in San Francisco. They are invited as honored guests! TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be performing on stage. On the top of that, their two featured movies ("Thriller at school" and "If you count five.." ) will also be shown at the Japan Festival San Francisco during the J-POP SUMMIT. They will also be greeting at the theater which means that the festival will be hijacked by TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE!

really good translation and flow!

hana_the_cat_2014 hana_the_cat_2014 2014/05/31 12:24:15

Thank you very much for the review. Your comments are so encouraging ! I really appreciate it!

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備考: アーティスト名は「​TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE」に統一下さい。全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。