翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 50 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 2 Reviews / 2014/05/21 01:05:13
#25led
新品と説明があるにも関わらず、
商品本体がビニールで包まれて、正規のパッケージではありませんでした。
商品説明文にはパッケージの説明もありませんでした。
お手数をおかけしますが、返品をお願い致します。
Although the description said it is new, the product was covered with a plastic bag, but not a proper packaging.
Also there was no excuse in the product description.
Please kindly accept returning and refund.
レビュー ( 2 )
元の翻訳
Although the description said it is new, the product was covered with a plastic bag, but not a proper packaging.
Also there was no excuse in the product description.
Please kindly accept returning and refund.
修正後
#25led↵
Although the product is new and has a description, ↵
the product itself was wrapped in a plastic bag and not with the proper packaging.
There were also no packaging description in the product description.
Sorry for the trouble, but I would be returning the product.
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元の翻訳
Although the description said it is new, the product was covered with a plastic bag, but not a proper packaging.
Also there was no excuse in the product description.
Please kindly accept returning and refund.
修正後
Although the description said it is new, the product was covered in a plastic bag, but not a proper packaging.
Also there was no excuse [word choice] in the product description.
Please kindly accept returning and refund.
レビューありがとうございます。言い回しが勉強になりました。ただし原文は新品ではないと主張しているため、修正後の文は誤訳だと思います。