翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

生年月日：1990年9月28日
身長: 182cm
血液型：A
出身地：大分県


SOLIDEMOの国体出場アスリート。
九州学生陸上競技対抗選手権大会 十種競技 優勝。
全日本大学陸上競技対抗選手権大会 十種競技　現大分県記録樹立（6627点）
高跳びの記録が2m07cmなど大学生まで陸上選手として活躍。

英語

Date of Birth: 28th September 1990
Height: 182cm (5' 97")
Blood Type: A
Birth Place: Ōita

A member of SOLIDEMO who has participated National Sports Festival of Japan.
Won the victory in the decathlon competition at the Inter Collage Athletic Championship of Kyusyu.
The holder of the Ōita prefecture record of decathlon (6,627pts), which was achieved in the decathlon competition at the All Japan Inter Collage Athletic Championship.
Until he graduated his university, he had been an active athlete. His personal record of high jump is 2.07m (6' 79").

レビュー ( 1 )

lebron_2014はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/04/16 22:26:21

元の翻訳
Date of Birth: 28th September 1990
Height: 182cm (5' 97")
Blood Type: A
Birth Place: Ōita

A member of SOLIDEMO who has participated National Sports Festival of Japan.
Won the victory in the decathlon competition at the Inter Collage Athletic Championship of Kyusyu.
The holder of the Ōita prefecture record of decathlon (6,627pts), which was achieved in the decathlon competition at the All Japan Inter Collage Athletic Championship.
Until he graduated his university, he had been an active athlete. His personal record of high jump is 2.07m (6' 79").

修正後
Date of Birth: 28th September 1990
Height: 182 cm
Blood Type: A
Birth Place: Ōita

An athlete of SOLIDEMO who has participated in the National Sports Festival of Japan.
Won in the decathlon competition at the Kyusyu Student Athletics Championships.
Established the current decathlon record in Ōita prefecture (6,627pts) at the All Japan College Athletics Championships.
An active athlete until college and the holder of the high jump record of 2.07 m.

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