翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

株式会社Aに就職
私はディレクターとして、多くのクライアントを担当し販売促進の提案を行い売上アップに貢献。

株式会社G（エクステリアメーカー）に転職
営業部、広告宣伝部を兼務し商品開発から販売まで多くの仕事に携わる。
全国に販売先を開拓して売上成績トップになる。


今までの経験を活かして独立。
中小企業や美容関係、飲食店を中心にマーケティングコンサルティングや広告デザインをおこなう。
また、経営者を中心にマーケティングのセミナーを定期的に開催し、販売促進の方法を提供し、地域経済の発展に貢献。

英語

I joined A Co., Ltd..
As a director, I was responsible for many clients and contributed to the sales increase by making suggestions for sales promotion.

I joined G Co., Ltd. (exterior manufacturer).
Concurrently serving sales and public relations, I was involved in many tasks, from product development to sales.
As I developed clients all over the country, I became the top salesperson.

Utilizing my previous experience, I became independent.
I worked on marketing consulting and advertisement design mainly for small businesses, beauty salons, and eateries.
In addition, I held marketing seminars for managers periodically, provide sales promotion methods, and contributed to the development of the local economy.

レビュー ( 1 )

psychonyakuはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/28 15:10:04

元の翻訳
I joined A Co., Ltd..
As a director, I was responsible for many clients and contributed to the sales increase by making suggestions for sales promotion.

I joined G Co., Ltd. (exterior manufacturer).
Concurrently serving sales and public relations, I was involved in many tasks, from product development to sales.
As I developed clients all over the country, I became the top salesperson.

Utilizing my previous experience, I became independent.
I worked on marketing consulting and advertisement design mainly for small businesses, beauty salons, and eateries.
In addition, I held marketing seminars for managers periodically, provide sales promotion methods, and contributed to the development of the local economy.

修正後
I joined A Co., Ltd..
As a director, I was responsible for many clients and contributed to the sales increase by making suggestions for sales promotion.

I joined G Co., Ltd. (exterior manufacturer).
Concurrently serving sales and public relations, I was involved in many tasks, from product development to sales.
As I developed clients all over the country, I became the top salesperson.

Utilizing my previous experience, I became independent.
I worked on marketing consulting and advertisement design mainly for small to medium-sized businesses, beauty related industries , and eateries.
In addition, I held marketing seminars for managers periodically, provide sales promotion methods, and contributed to the development of the local economy.

お見事です。