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日本語

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英語

I apologize for contacting you while you are on your business trip.
If the order is placed by the end of this week, the shipment is going to be in April.
The shipment will be delayed if you order it later.
If you are trying to meet a certain delivery date, then I would recommend you to place your order by the end of the week.
If you were busy on your trip and could not make it, when would you be able to confirm the order?

レビュー ( 1 )

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/13 18:11:17

元の翻訳
I apologize for contacting you while you are on your business trip.
If the order is placed by the end of this week, the shipment is going to be in April.
The shipment will be delayed if you order it later.
If you are trying to meet a certain delivery date, then I would recommend you to place your order by the end of the week.
If you were busy on your trip and could not make it, when would you be able to confirm the order?

修正後
I apologize for contacting you while you are on your business trip.
If the order is placed by the end of this week, they will be shipped in April.
The shipment will be delayed if you order it later.
If you are trying to meet a certain delivery date, then I would recommend you to place your order by the end of the week.
If you were busy with your trip and could not place the order within this week, when would you be able to confirm the order?

[ashikkoman]

reviewありがとうございます！勉強になります