翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

申し訳ございません、リストアップしているオリジナルの写真のベースは既に売れてしまっています。
他の販売可能なベースの実物の写真を手配します。メーカーや問屋に確認していますので少しお待ちください。分かり次第、ご連絡いたします。


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英語

I am sorry. The bass in the original photo is already sold out.
I will send you actual photos of basses available. Please wait for a while as I'll be making inquiry with manufactures and wholesalers. I will let you know as soon as I find out.

When you play the guitar, please make sure to give us your review.
I would be grateful if you could reply to our shop's customer service.
I will look for the guitar you requested. I will email you with our recommendation.

レビュー ( 1 )

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/06 10:36:25

元の翻訳

I am sorry. The bass in the original photo is already sold out.
I will send you actual photos of basses available. Please wait for a while as I'll be making inquiry with manufactures and wholesalers. I will let you know as soon as I find out.

When you play the guitar, please make sure to give us your review.
I would be grateful if you could reply to our shop's customer service.
I will look for the guitar you requested. I will email you with our recommendation.

修正後

I am sorry. The bass in the original photo is already sold out.
I will send you actual photos of basses that are available. Please wait for a while as I'll be making inquiry with manufactures and wholesalers. I will let you know as soon as I find out.

When you play the guitar, please make sure to give us your review.
I would be grateful if you could reply to our shop's customer service.
I will look for the guitar you requested, and I will email you our recommendation.

ＩとWeは統一した方がいいような気がします。こんな感じで、という箇所は反映されていませんよね？